Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 22nd January 2012, 11:07
First topic message reminder :
Hi guys,I've been wanting to be a critic since a long time ago and now I finally have the time to do this.. anyways,I've been singing since I was 3 years old..All my life there's not a day without music and singing..So I do know a thing or two about music ;) I've been making youtube covers since 2009 and I used to take vocal lessons too..I mostly know K-pop and western songs..any language is fine but I wouldn't be able to critic your pronounciation..I will critic you with a 0%-100% notation.. Maximum 1 clips per person.. you have to wait for a week before posting another clip..
Fill this form if u want to be criticed: -Song: -Artist: -Video or mp3:
Song Challenge: KOREAN: -SNSD - Complete -IU - Good Day -IU - You&I -T-ara feat. Davichi - We were in love -JYJ - In Heaven -Apink - I don't know -Brown Eyed Girls - Sixth Sense
ENGLISH: -Cascada - What hurts the most -Kelly Clarkson - Mr.Know it all -Jessie J - Price Tag -Katy Perry - ET -Katy Perry - TGIF -Nicki Minaj - Superbass
Notes: Be careful of what you wish for because I might hurt you with my words :ryuko:
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AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 5th June 2012, 18:12
-Song: Summer Medley 2011 (The Edge of Glory, Last Friday Night, Superbass, Give me everything, Party Rock Anthem) -Artist: Sam Tsui (Lady Gaga, Katy Perryy, Nicki Minaj, Neyo, LMFAO) -Video or mp3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZZvOgn1vqfc
Thanks :D
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 06:34
Song: Because I'm a Girl Artist: IU Video:
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 07:52
sakisaki wrote:
Rie!!~ I'm here againn..><
Song: Egao ni Namida ~ Thank you Dear my Friends Artist: Niigaki Risa ~ Matsuura Aya Video:
I'm gonna rate your cover 85% out of 100% I think your voice is really great and stable..but you strain when you sing higher notes..I really like the energy that you put here..^^ keep on practicing on higher notes than notes that are in your comfort zone...good luck <3
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 07:56
AnihJourney wrote:
-Song: Summer Medley 2011 (The Edge of Glory, Last Friday Night, Superbass, Give me everything, Party Rock Anthem) -Artist: Sam Tsui (Lady Gaga, Katy Perryy, Nicki Minaj, Neyo, LMFAO) -Video or mp3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZZvOgn1vqfc
Thanks :D
I'm gonna rate this 100% out of 100% OMG,this sounds sooo good :D seriously!! I think this is the best cover of yours yet..your pronounciation have improved as well..Overall,you deserve a perfect scoring :3
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 08:01
cloudymelody wrote:
Song: Because I'm a Girl Artist: IU Video:
I'm gonna rate this 80% out of 100% Your voice is quite stable in the first verse but it became flat before the chorus and bridge..I can really sense your feelings in this cover and I love it!! I hope you learn how to control your voice more 'cause I know if you master it you're gonna be so awesomee <3
JasmineMarshiana LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 684 Age : 26 Location : Hong Kong Registration date : 2011-11-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 10:44
-Song: Call me maybe -Artist: Carly Rae Jepsen -Video or mp3:
Crappy Vid :P Youtube always screw up my vids :'( Thanks :)))
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 6th June 2012, 12:02
JasmineMarshiana wrote:
-Song: Call me maybe -Artist: Carly Rae Jepsen -Video or mp3:
Crappy Vid :P Youtube always screw up my vids :'( Thanks :)))
I'm gonna rate this 95% out of 100% I really love your voice..It's really soft and pretty ^^ perfect pronounciation and I didn't found any wrong pitch..the only thing I'd like to add is your mixing isn't the best D: It can be improved..like in "Before you came into my life" the "I missed you so bad" is a little late..It's just that kind of imperfection..other than that I think you're amazing <3 love love lovee this cover!!
fujisakura8906 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 336 Age : 35 Registration date : 2010-07-27
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 8th June 2012, 13:16
-Song: Maybe -Artist: Annie Musical -Video or mp3:
Please help me critic. I need help to improve. My voice it's a little bit rusty already.
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 8th June 2012, 14:45
fujisakura8906 wrote:
-Song: Maybe -Artist: Annie Musical -Video or mp3:
Please help me critic. I need help to improve. My voice it's a little bit rusty already.
I'm gonna rate this 80% out of 100% you have a pretty good voice and I think you can hit those high pitches really well but I still hear some flat notes..You also sounded kinda nasal at some parts..but overall I still enjoy your cover and I hope you'll improve more by practice :D GOOD LUCK!!
fujisakura8906 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 336 Age : 35 Registration date : 2010-07-27
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 8th June 2012, 15:51
Rie wrote:
fujisakura8906 wrote:
-Song: Maybe -Artist: Annie Musical -Video or mp3:
Please help me critic. I need help to improve. My voice it's a little bit rusty already.
I'm gonna rate this 80% out of 100% you have a pretty good voice and I think you can hit those high pitches really well but I still hear some flat notes..You also sounded kinda nasal at some parts..but overall I still enjoy your cover and I hope you'll improve more by practice :D GOOD LUCK!!
Thanks. ^-^ I will try my best in my next cover. hehe...
PiggyMelody Retired
Number of posts : 1116 Age : 24 Location : California Registration date : 2011-01-06
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 8th June 2012, 22:54
I'm gonna rate this 85% out of 100% I gotta say you improved everytime I heard your cover :D this cover is really good..the only thing lacking is the harmonies..It sounded pitchy but your main vocals are fine..just work on singing harmonies by hearing the song carefully and not just sing it with your intuition 'cause if you're not pro you can't really determine which note is the best for the harmonization..so it's better if you copy the original first then maybe after lots of harmonizing someday you can do it by intuition :D
Anisxo LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 427 Age : 28 Location : Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Registration date : 2012-02-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 9th June 2012, 17:10
Idk if you can critic an acapella because mine is an acapella lol I'll try to record any songs with background music in the future
But i love recording acapella more because i can only hear me and my voice lol *self praised* xD xD
I am actually scared right now lol
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 9th June 2012, 20:51
-Song: twitter -Artist: DevilishP -Video or mp3: twitter
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 05:44
Idk if you can critic an acapella because mine is an acapella lol I'll try to record any songs with background music in the future
But i love recording acapella more because i can only hear me and my voice lol *self praised* xD xD
I am actually scared right now lol
I'm gonna rate this 90% out of 100% other than the "hmm" in the beginning I think you don't have any false notes/pitch..I really like your voice and I think your pronounciation is flawless as well..I really like the fact that you sang the song in your own style instead of copying the guys voice..you did a really great job and I'm looking forward for your next cover!! good luck <3
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 05:51
Shiori wrote:
-Song: twitter -Artist: DevilishP -Video or mp3: twitter
I'm gonna rate this 70% out of 100% well,this is better than the last cover you gave me..I think you definitely sing better in Japanese..but I still have the same critic for you..you sounded good at the verse and not in the chorus..and even though the mixing is really good I can still easily hear the pitchyness of your voice.. in 03:26 - 03:38 is just soooo forced..I'm worried with your vocal cords D: you shouldn't sing with that much force if you can't reach the notes It would only damage your vocal cords and also wouldn't sound really good for the cover..
dnxo14 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28
Subject: Brown Eyed Girls - Sign (Acoustic Version) 10th June 2012, 09:17
-Song: Sign (Acoustic Version) -Artist: Brown Eyed Girls -Video or mp3:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RwsFjeXP38&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 13:59
Rie wrote:
Shiori wrote:
-Song: twitter -Artist: DevilishP -Video or mp3: twitter
I'm gonna rate this 70% out of 100% well,this is better than the last cover you gave me..I think you definitely sing better in Japanese..but I still have the same critic for you..you sounded good at the verse and not in the chorus..and even though the mixing is really good I can still easily hear the pitchyness of your voice.. in 03:26 - 03:38 is just soooo forced..I'm worried with your vocal cords D: you shouldn't sing with that much force if you can't reach the notes It would only damage your vocal cords and also wouldn't sound really good for the cover..
Haha thanks ^^;; Yeah, rock's not really my genre... the chorus of twitter, esp the last chorus, was out of my chest voice range. But rock, which is meant to be sang powerfully and belted out, sounds like crap if I try going into head voice/falsetto. Any tips on increasing chest voice range or increasing head voice strength? :/
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 14:16
Shiori wrote:
Rie wrote:
Shiori wrote:
-Song: twitter -Artist: DevilishP -Video or mp3: twitter
I'm gonna rate this 70% out of 100% well,this is better than the last cover you gave me..I think you definitely sing better in Japanese..but I still have the same critic for you..you sounded good at the verse and not in the chorus..and even though the mixing is really good I can still easily hear the pitchyness of your voice.. in 03:26 - 03:38 is just soooo forced..I'm worried with your vocal cords D: you shouldn't sing with that much force if you can't reach the notes It would only damage your vocal cords and also wouldn't sound really good for the cover..
Haha thanks ^^;; Yeah, rock's not really my genre... the chorus of twitter, esp the last chorus, was out of my chest voice range. But rock, which is meant to be sang powerfully and belted out, sounds like crap if I try going into head voice/falsetto. Any tips on increasing chest voice range or increasing head voice strength? :/
For Chest Voice: Relax, drop you jaw, open your chest breathe deep and sing. Stretching your vocal range can only be done with doing it. If you're serious, find a voice coach, but give your body time to adjust. Sing beyond your range, but don't force it.
For Falsetto: falsetto is a vocal mode but in order for singers to achieve mastering any vocal mode, they must make sure they have mastered the natural voice first, there is no special exercise for falsetto, it's just a softer way of singing.
Hope this helps :D
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 14:26
dnxo14 wrote:
-Song: Sign (Acoustic Version) -Artist: Brown Eyed Girls -Video or mp3:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RwsFjeXP38&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))
I'm gonna rate this 70% out of 100% I think you made this song sadder than it already is >< I don't think you have any pitch problems but I think the way you sing it is really TOO emotional..it really feels like you're about to burst into tears while singing it..you know you can sing with emotion without sounding like you're sad right..? you can take Insooni's goose's dream for instance,she sang a really emotional song but she sang it with so much power yet she still manage to sound powerful..
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 10th June 2012, 19:38
Hi Rie can you critic this please ^^ ? Thankyu... I know that i miss rythm in this song...
Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 11th June 2012, 02:31
Rie wrote:
dnxo14 wrote:
-Song: Sign (Acoustic Version) -Artist: Brown Eyed Girls -Video or mp3:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RwsFjeXP38&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))
I'm gonna rate this 70% out of 100% I think you made this song sadder than it already is >< I don't think you have any pitch problems but I think the way you sing it is really TOO emotional..it really feels like you're about to burst into tears while singing it..you know you can sing with emotion without sounding like you're sad right..? you can take Insooni's goose's dream for instance,she sang a really emotional song but she sang it with so much power yet she still manage to sound powerful..
power .. but this song doesn't require power, i think :)) .. i actually took the BEG's version of this as an example and i think i actually lack that emotion :)) ahaha so yeah!~ .. anyway, thank you very much for allotting your time on this review .. thank you :))
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 11th June 2012, 03:45
Hyuriko wrote:
Hi Rie can you critic this please ^^ ? Thankyu... I know that i miss rythm in this song...
I'm gonna rate this 80% out of 100% I like your voice..I think it's really pretty and soothing but I think you sing with the wrong technique..learn how to sing with your diagphram (you can look it up in google and youtube) and also I think your voice still needs polishing..but from what I hear you have a lot of potential in your voice and I'm sure if you practice enough you can be so amazing ^^
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 11th June 2012, 11:31
I'm gonna rate this 80% out of 100% I like your voice..I think it's really pretty and soothing but I think you sing with the wrong technique..learn how to sing with your diagphram (you can look it up in google and youtube) and also I think your voice still needs polishing..but from what I hear you have a lot of potential in your voice and I'm sure if you practice enough you can be so amazing ^^
Oh thankyu Rie... I try to sing with my diaphram but finally i'm too concentred for sing with this technic... I probably take singing learning next year :).Thanks again ♥
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 12th June 2012, 03:12
Song: Perfect Crime Artist: samfree Critique for both singers please~
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 12th June 2012, 03:26
Shiori wrote:
Song: Perfect Crime Artist: samfree Critique for both singers please~
Only one cover per week :)
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 12th June 2012, 03:42
Rie wrote:
Shiori wrote:
Song: Perfect Crime Artist: samfree Critique for both singers please~
Only one cover per week :)
Oops, forgot about that XD;; Can I just leave it up there and you can critique it next week? :0
JasmineMarshiana LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 684 Age : 26 Location : Hong Kong Registration date : 2011-11-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 12th June 2012, 12:59
Rie wrote:
JasmineMarshiana wrote:
-Song: Call me maybe -Artist: Carly Rae Jepsen -Video or mp3:
Crappy Vid :P Youtube always screw up my vids :'( Thanks :)))
I'm gonna rate this 95% out of 100% I really love your voice..It's really soft and pretty ^^ perfect pronounciation and I didn't found any wrong pitch..the only thing I'd like to add is your mixing isn't the best D: It can be improved..like in "Before you came into my life" the "I missed you so bad" is a little late..It's just that kind of imperfection..other than that I think you're amazing <3 love love lovee this cover!!
Thanks Rie :))) I'm still not too skillful in mixing :P I will let you comment again next time when I cover another song!!!!! :)))
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 14th June 2012, 05:54
I'm gonna rate this 95% out of 100% This is such a beautiful cover :D I really love it,I think your voice really fits the song..the only flaws is the pronounciation..I totally understand though,you're not Korean :) other than pronounciation I think you're really good!! pitch is perfectly controlled..love love love <3
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 14th June 2012, 05:59
Shiori wrote:
Song: Perfect Crime Artist: samfree Critique for both singers please~
I'm gonna rate this 85% out of 100% I think this is quite good ^^ you two sounds so in sync..and Shiori you sounded soo cute :D I think your voice really suit this kind of song.. the male singer is really good at controling his voice but he lacks at emotion..on the contrary I think you lacks voice controling but you have a really great emotion..I think that's the reason why this duet sounded soo good,It's because you two completes each other flaws :D
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 14th June 2012, 06:02
I'm going to close this thread for a while from 19 June - 29 June..I'm going to Singapore for holiday..sadly there's no wi-fi in my apartment there..so yeah :D just a reminder..
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Beee~~ LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 7 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-24
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 14th June 2012, 07:55
Annyeonghaseyo!^^ hope you can review this before you go singapore. haha we might meet each other since i stay there xD
oh really? you're a Singaporean? that's cool ^^
I'm gonna rate this 90% out of 100% I think you have a really pretty voice ^^ I really love this cover,the only flaws you have is that "I know" is kinda pitchy..
Beee~~ LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 7 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-24
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 16th June 2012, 13:10
Annyeonghaseyo!^^ hope you can review this before you go singapore. haha we might meet each other since i stay there xD
oh really? you're a Singaporean? that's cool ^^
I'm gonna rate this 90% out of 100% I think you have a really pretty voice ^^ I really love this cover,the only flaws you have is that "I know" is kinda pitchy..
yupp^^ thanks for ur critique,i'll work harder xD and enjoy ur stay in sg! ^^
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 18th June 2012, 08:09
Hopefully you can critic this before you go to Singapore tomorrow. (I'm Singaporean! ^^)
Song: Heaven Artist: Ailee
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 18th June 2012, 13:58
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Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 19th June 2012, 01:02
Hi Rie ! Can u critic my korean cover please ^^ ? Please don't critic my pronunciation it suck a lot... I can clearly see that i don't really pronunce the lyrics good here...( Because i probably have not the wrong lyrics...) And don't be afraid my playback suck too T__T... Critic just my vocal please... It's kind ^^
Number of posts : 427 Age : 28 Location : Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia Registration date : 2012-02-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Rie's House of Critic 19th June 2012, 11:23
Okay i promised that i'll record a song with background but whenever i used instrumental my voice sounds funny xD but i'll try to record one in the future teeehee