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Subject: [OPEN] Anih's office 1st January 2012, 22:13
NEW SYSTEM OF NOTATION
My Music story :
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6 years old, I was lazy, I had to stop my piano lessons after 3 or 4 years because I was bad at it lol... 15 years old, Piano again, just 1 year. I think playing what I want, when I want, and how I want, it's better. lol. 16 years old, Violin but studies are priority so, just 1 year. The same year, I started learning guitar by myself. New Music story : 20 years old, Ukulele for my birthday ! yeah ! =) I started covering songs in Youtube in 2009, you can check my youtube videos =) But I don't really like them... I love Gavin DeGraw and Yuna Ito, and I listen JJ Lin everyday =)).
I'm not very good at singing but I love criticize people =) I don't really speak english so it's hard for me here =). I will do my best and write some comments for you =). «....» means I searched a word in a translator =). "....." means I don't know how to say it and I hope you understand =).
If you want a critic in French, ask me =)
I need to know :
Song : Artist : Link :
I will give you a note /100 and may tell you some things good or not :P
Number of Maximum clip submitted to criticize : 1/post/second =)
SONG CHALLENGE
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Korean : Haru Haru - Big Bang Japanese : Mika Nakashima's songs; Yuna Ito's songs Chinese : Lemon Tree - Tarcy, Aiya - Vanness Wu, Scandal - Vanness Wu, Shuo ai jiu ai - Vanness Wu, Jay Chou's rap songs English : Queen's songs, The in crowd - Mitchell Musso, Banquet - Bloc party, Eminem's song, Ain't a thing - Tyler Hilton, Cop Stop - Gavin DeGraw, When you're gone - Avril Lavigne, Pretty fly - The offspring Other Languages : L'hymne à l'amour - Edith Piaf (french), J'envoie valser - Zazie (french), Sambame - Upa Dance (spanish), Quelque Part - Sheryfa Luna (french)
This critic center will be closed and open, closed, open, closed, open... =)
"Customers"
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boadbsklover : Can U Smile - Infinite PiggyMelody : Rainbow Raindrops - Shine Huang jiroSHExfilesTATU : No no no no no - C-Real maknaerin : Can U Smile - Infinite HayHay : The Boys (Eng vers.) - SNSD Mi Young : You And I - Park Bom Rie : Be My Baby - Wonder Girls iammemey : 0330- U KISS Kelly : Me In - Wonder Girls iammemey : Only Learned The Bad Things - B1A4 Kariya : Run Devil Run (Jap vers.) - SNSD PiggyMelody : 五天幾年 - Freya Lin Kariya : Rolling in the deep - Adele Kelly : Bye Bye/The Boys - T-ara/SNSD @Casi : Mistake - SNSD PiggyMelody : 你是我心内的一首歌 - 王力宏&Selina Hyuriko : Silver no udedokei - Morning Musume Hyuriko : Gee (Jazz version) - SNSD @Casi : Possibility - BoA Hyuriko: It hurts - 2NE1 PiggyMelody : 安静了 - SHE PiggyMelody : All Happy - Ah Fu skyangerzx : My My - A Pink Stellaniou : Cover Girl - Infinite Rie: UFO - Stellar Hyuriko: Superstar - Hershe Hyuriko : Yang Wang - Rainie Yang Hara : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo shioЯi : UGLY - 2NE1 Hyuriko: Twinkle - TaeTiSeo shioЯi : Perfect Crime - Vocaloid Hyuriko: Sakura - Ikimono Gakari cafelatte : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo cloudymelody: Nagging - IU ft. Seulong Hyuriko: Flavor of life - Utada hikaru PiggyMelody: 什么样的爱 - Jolin Tsai Hyuriko: Passion - Utada hikaru Hyuriko: Prisoner of love - Utada hikaru cloudymelody: Because I'm a girl - IU Ginger : この胸のときめきを Kono Mune no Tokimeki wo - 真野恵里 Manoeri fujisakura8906 : Tian Mi Mi - Teresa Teng Shiori : Twitter - DevilishP Rie : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo dnxo14 : For Your Love Jang HyeJin Hyuriko: One Two Three - Morning Musume fujisakura8906: Over the Rainbow - Danielle Hope cloudymelody : Heaven - Ailee cloudymelody : The Story Only I Didn't Know - IU Shiori : Because I'm A Woman - IU JasmineMarshiana : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo cloudymelody : I love you - Taeyeon ------------------------------------- cloudymelody: Heaven - Ailee
Update (7 sept 2013) Don't worry, be happy !
PODIUM : 3 favorite covers rated
Casi / memeysuju - B1A4 - Only learned the bad things
JasmineMarshiana - TaeTiSeo - Twinkle
boadbsklover - Infinite - Can you smile
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 05:16
Song : Can You Smile (piano ver.) Artist : Infinite Video or mp3 : video Notation system : 4 :)
PiggyMelody Retired
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 05:33
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 05:46
boadbsklover wrote:
Song : Can You Smile (piano ver.) Artist : Infinite Video or mp3 : video Notation system : 4 :)
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1. Your voice is very sweet : it's fluid. 2. Your high notes are so beautiful. 3. I think the volume is perfect : instru, main voice and harmonies. 4. The quality is as good as a CD song, for me. 5. When I listened it, just your first notes, I like it <3 6. You have a good rhythm or the mix is totally perfect. Your voice feet perfectly with the instrumental. 7. I feel emotion when I listen your cover. 8. When the tonality is changing, I listen like an hesitation, before you starting to sing. Maybe it's like that, it's what you wanted but for me it's a little strange. But I noticed it in my 5th listening. 9. Maybe you can try to work your respirations. You can breathe less often or take less air. 10. For me, it's a perfect cover. So your rating is PERFECT. You maybe wondering why it's perfect if I found defects. It's because you sing it very well and we will always listen breaths. All the good things you have when you sing is «crushing» what you can do wrong. Edit (6/Jan/2012) : I completely fell in love with your yeah.
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AnihJourney LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 06:12
1. For my first listening, I wanted to cry. So I supposed your voice is too cute or you have a real emotion when you sing =). 2. Even if I don't know the song, I listened some wrong notes but I had to listen more than 1 time to hear them =). 3. The first problem with your cover is the sound : I hear different so many differents volumes. Sometimes I "don't hear" your voice, sometimes, it's very clear. 4. The second problem is «the offset». For a better cover, mix it with a very good precision. So the voices have to be more synchronized. 5. I feel little stress or hesitation in your voice sometimes, You have to sing with self-assurance. Make yourself trust because you have a great beautiful voice. 6. You have beautiful low notes. 7. Your singing is very good mostly. 8. The song fit with your voice. Your rating is 73% For a better cover, work mixing and assurance.
jiroSHExfilesTATU LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 718 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2011-11-30
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 07:37
Song : No No No No No Artist : C-REAL Video or mp3 : my cover Notation system : 5
So you also criticize the mixing? I'm sorry but i only do live covers. i don't mix. kekeke. Thanks in advance!
to help you point out my, uhm, imperfection, here... i don't like my "eh eh eh" parts in the intro and my "no, no, no" adlibs at the end....
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 09:14
jiroSHExfilesTATU wrote:
Song : No No No No No Artist : C-REAL Video or mp3 : my cover Notation system : 5
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1. Your high notes are awesome 2. You have a very good rhythm =) 3. You rap very well, I like it =) 4. I am impressed by your transitions : singing - rap - singing 5. You have a very good voice and fluid. 6. I agree with you, your eh eh eh are quiet strange but they are still good 7. Your no no no no are good ! 8. I have the impression you are singing this song just because you like the song and you like singing. You have to show more emotions. I feel emotion but not in the entire song. There is more emotions after the half of the song. 9. The quality of the sound is good but better if we listen just a little bit more the instrumental. Your rating is 96%. It's a really great cover.
jiroSHExfilesTATU LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 718 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2011-11-30
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd January 2012, 09:28
AnihJourney wrote:
jiroSHExfilesTATU wrote:
Song : No No No No No Artist : C-REAL Video or mp3 : my cover Notation system : 5
Spoiler:
1. Your high notes are awesome 2. You have a very good rhythm =) 3. You rap very well, I like it =) 4. I am impressed by your transitions : singing - rap - singing 5. You have a very good voice and fluid. 6. I agree with you, your eh eh eh are quiet strange but they are still good 7. Your no no no no are good ! 8. I have the impression you are singing this song just because you like the song and you like singing. You have to show more emotions. I feel emotion but not in the entire song. There is more emotions after the half of the song. 9. The quality of the sound is good but better if we listen just a little bit more the instrumental. Your rating is 96%. It's a really great cover.
kamsahamnida!!! yeah, i think i have "emotion issues" lol. i haven't found an instrumental that time so i just used the original then i turned the treble of our speaker on full blast. thanks for the high score!! really! thank you! at least my repetition of the singing the whole song (17 times but i used the 13th one.lol.) paid off. kekeke...
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 3rd January 2012, 07:16
AnihJourney wrote:
boadbsklover wrote:
Song : Can You Smile (piano ver.) Artist : Infinite Video or mp3 : video Notation system : 4 :)
Spoiler:
1. Your voice is very sweet : it's fluid. 2. Your high notes are so beautiful. 3. I think the volume is perfect : instru, main voice and harmonies. 4. The quality is as good as a CD song, for me. 5. When I listened it, just your first notes, I like it <3 6. You have a good rhythm or the mix is totally perfect. Your voice feet perfectly with the instrumental. 7. I feel emotion when I listen your cover. 8. When the tonality is changing, I listen like an hesitation, before you starting to sing. Maybe it's like that, it's what you wanted but for me it's a little strange. But I noticed it in my 5th listening. 9. Maybe you can try to work your respirations. You can breathe less often or take less air. 10. For me, it's a perfect cover. So your rating is PERFECT. You maybe wondering why it's perfect if I found defects. It's because you sing it very well and we will always listen breaths. All the good things you have when you sing is «crushing» what you can do wrong.
aww thanks for giving me perfect lol and yes, I think so. I really must work on my breathing/respirations T^T I'm trying to use my diaphragm but I'm still not used to it though it's so hard T^T I hope I'll get used to it soon thank you so much for the critic :)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 6th January 2012, 17:32
1. Your voice is very pleasant to hear. 2. Your sing very well even if I heard some wrong notes (2 or 3). =» Don't worry, I do more than the double of your wrong notes when I post covers =) 3. Your yeah are a little bit "not synchronized". 4. At the start of the song, it's synchronized with the piano but after, not really. I think you can improve this aspect. After the variation, (excepted the first note And) it's synchronized but it becomes not synchronized then. 5. Your harmonies are nice but could be better. Some are well synchronized. Maybe your Smile are little bit strange. 6. The volume of your instru-voice is very well. I think it's the perfect balance. Your rating : 87% The main thing to improve is your «delay» or your mixing. If you change one of the two, it will be «almost» perfect. It's a really good cover because I can listen it again, again and again, even after criticizing =)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 7th January 2012, 10:03
1. Your voice is very pleasant to hear. 2. Your sing very well even if I heard some wrong notes (2 or 3). =» Don't worry, I do more than the double of your wrong notes when I post covers =) 3. Your yeah are a little bit "not synchronized". 4. At the start of the song, it's synchronized with the piano but after, not really. I think you can improve this aspect. After the variation, (excepted the first note And) it's synchronized but it becomes not synchronized then. 5. Your harmonies are nice but could be better. Some are well synchronized. Maybe your Smile are little bit strange. 6. The volume of your instru-voice is very well. I think it's the perfect balance. Your rating : 87% The main thing to improve is your «delay» or your mixing. If you change one of the two, it will be «almost» perfect. It's a really good cover because I can listen it again, again and again, even after criticizing =)
aha..thank you so much! and yeah, I'm still new to covers and mixing and I hope to improve this year! :) I'm actually more into rapping, but I really want to improve my singing. Thank you again ^_^
HayHay LTS Raindrop
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 15th January 2012, 03:49
Song : The Boys (Eng Vers) Artist : SNSD Video or mp3 : The Boys Cover Notation system : 5 :)
please be as harsh as you can with this, because I really want to improve~~ haha. :)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 15th January 2012, 04:23
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 15th January 2012, 21:45
HayHay wrote:
Song : The Boys (Eng Vers) Artist : SNSD Video or mp3 : The Boys Cover Notation system : 5 :)
please be as harsh as you can with this, because I really want to improve~~ haha. :)
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1. You rap very well ! 2. You are synchronized, you have the rhythm. 3. The hard notes are not really good. Sometimes better. I think you have to change your voice to do a better note, for the hardest. Change your voice = don't sing with your "speaking voice" hard notes. 4. It's almost an a capella... For this song, I think, the music have to take place a little bit more. 5. I think the last "sentence" should be louder. Because it's the end. 6. Notes are generally accurate but it's like you are stressed in the beggining of the song. 7. You have a good dynamism but sometimes a little "too much". 8. You have a beautiful voice and we hear it. Your rating : 80 % it's a good cover, you just have to work on hard notes and get self-assurance.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 15th January 2012, 22:21
1. I feel lot of emotion when you sing. 2. Your voice is very beautiful and simple. 3. You sing very well, with accurate notes. 4. Your harmonies, in the beggining are a little strange for me... 5. I'm sad the song finishes like that. I'm like «O.O». I want more or I want the song "finish". 6. Short, so I don't really know what I can say. Your rating : 95 % Maybe you have to change your harmonies for this cover or the problem is me =)) I don't mean to re-sing harmonies... Just to say it's just the thing in the cover I think strange =)
HayHay LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 193 Age : 28 Location : shh. it's a secret. ;) Registration date : 2012-01-13
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 15th January 2012, 23:36
AnihJourney wrote:
HayHay wrote:
Song : The Boys (Eng Vers) Artist : SNSD Video or mp3 : The Boys Cover Notation system : 5 :)
please be as harsh as you can with this, because I really want to improve~~ haha. :)
Spoiler:
1. You rap very well ! 2. You are synchronized, you have the rhythm. 3. The hard notes are not really good. Sometimes better. I think you have to change your voice to do a better note, for the hardest. Change your voice = don't sing with your "speaking voice" hard notes. 4. It's almost an a capella... For this song, I think, the music have to take place a little bit more. 5. I think the last "sentence" should be louder. Because it's the end. 6. Notes are generally accurate but it's like you are stressed in the beggining of the song. 7. You have a good dynamism but sometimes a little "too much". 8. You have a beautiful voice and we hear it. Your rating : 80 % it's a good cover, you just have to work on hard notes and get self-assurance.
Thank you for critique~~ :D I'll take your advice and apply it the next time I do a cover~ 감사합니다~~♥♥♥
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 19th January 2012, 08:01
Song : Be my baby Artist : Wonder girls Video or mp3 : Notation system : 5
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th January 2012, 04:21
Rie wrote:
Song : Be my baby Artist : Wonder girls Video or mp3 : Notation system : 5
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1. You have a good vocal technical. I think all your notes are accurate. 2. I hear a good energy, a good dynamism. 3. I feel emotion, willingness. 4. You rap well ! 5. I love your transition : rap to chorus. It's beautiful I think. 6. I don't know why but I think your be my baby are little bit boring. Maybe you have to use different style for this part. Because there are lot of be my baby, and the original song is sung by 5 people. Your rating : 97 % I think you just a really great singer but you have to find the more complicated song when you sing : something more others don't have. I don't really know the right word... I think I can call it : personnal-inside-star =) Or I don't know if it's «"voice signature"»... I hope you understand what I mean =)
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th January 2012, 15:03
AnihJourney wrote:
Rie wrote:
Song : Be my baby Artist : Wonder girls Video or mp3 : Notation system : 5
Spoiler:
1. You have a good vocal technical. I think all your notes are accurate. 2. I hear a good energy, a good dynamism. 3. I feel emotion, willingness. 4. You rap well ! 5. I love your transition : rap to chorus. It's beautiful I think. 6. I don't know why but I think your be my baby are little bit boring. Maybe you have to use different style for this part. Because there are lot of be my baby, and the original song is sung by 5 people. Your rating : 97 % I think you just a really great singer but you have to find the more complicated song when you sing : something more others don't have. I don't really know the right word... I think I can call it : personnal-inside-star =) Or I don't know if it's «"voice signature"»... I hope you understand what I mean =)
Thank you for the critique ^^ and I'll try my best to improve my voice from now on..
@Casi LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th January 2012, 16:33
1. I really like your voice. 2. I'm searching something to say but very very hard... 3. You rap is so well ! Awesome job ! 4. I feel lot of emotion, I think I was going to cry first time I listen your cover =) Cry not because it can be sad (I don't understand lyrics) but crying because it's a wonderful cover. 5. I love your different voices (parts). 6. Your mix is perfect. Harmonies in harmonies, Synchronisation and good volumes. 7. I like your dynamism. 8. <3 For the part singing and raping in same time. Best part <3 9. I don't find a bad thing... I'm searching searchin searching hard. Your rating : 100 % After lot of listenings, if I don't find something bad, I think it's because it's more than perfect.
@Casi LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 21st January 2012, 07:31
1. I really like your voice. 2. I'm searching something to say but very very hard... 3. You rap is so well ! Awesome job ! 4. I feel lot of emotion, I think I was going to cry first time I listen your cover =) Cry not because it can be sad (I don't understand lyrics) but crying because it's a wonderful cover. 5. I love your different voices (parts). 6. Your mix is perfect. Harmonies in harmonies, Synchronisation and good volumes. 7. I like your dynamism. 8. <3 For the part singing and raping in same time. Best part <3 9. I don't find a bad thing... I'm searching searchin searching hard. Your rating : 100 % After lot of listenings, if I don't find something bad, I think it's because it's more than perfect.
thank you^^ whew!~
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 21st January 2012, 18:31
Song : Me In Artist : Wonder Girls Video or mp3 : Video Notation system : les pourcentages :D
@Casi LTS Firefly
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 22nd January 2012, 05:38
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 24th January 2012, 22:35
Kelly wrote:
Song : Me In Artist : Wonder Girls Video or mp3 : Notation system : les pourcentages :D
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1. You rap very well. I prefer with your low voice, it's more expressive. 2. I don't like the beggining : it's too loud, savage and the «boy» is not beautiful. maybe wrong notes. 3. The rest is very good. 4. You have a great dynamism : it's powerful and the rhythm is respected. 5. Your notes are accurate if you don't shout too loud. 6. The end is a little bit slower than the instrumental we hear behind. 7. You seem self-assured that is a very good quality. 8. I feel lot of emotion and I think you are happy to sing this song. Your rating : 90 % Just the beggining and the ending are not perfect. The rest is. You have to continue the way you sing =)
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 25th January 2012, 03:43
1. Already from the beggining, I feel lot of emotion.. I was going to cry =) yes i often cry. 2. Your rap is so beautiful. 3. Your voice is so clear and your technical is so awesome ! I like your yeah, oh, and all the other notes/words =) 4. All your notes are very accurate. I don't know compared to the original. Thanks to you, I want to listen the song I like. (So now I'm watching the clip. Anw beautiful guys... why koreans boys in bands are so waw ?) o.O the clip is so cute <3 5. Your mix is very well ! 6. You are not boring because you sing with a special way that force us to listen until the end. 7. Your cover has a special dynamism : I am dancing with emotion on my head and with my hands, when I listen it. I can listen your cover non stop. 8. You feel self-assured like you've been singing since before you were born =) Are you a vampire ? xD 9. The end is very expressive, your last word is perfect. 10. You can modulate your voice easily : soft, strong, powerful, normal =) and always with emotion. Your rating : 100% I am wondering why you ask me to criticize this perfect cover. But I can say more things than your other one.
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 25th January 2012, 09:30
OMG! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I REALLY APPRECIATED YOUR CRITIC!
YEAH IM A VAMPIRE! LAWL! AND IMMA BITE U RAWR~ HEHEHEH...
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 28th January 2012, 13:25
1. You have a really good dynamism that makes the song more dynamic than it already was. 2. You have some "unaccurate" notes. Particulary you be in You better. 3. You seem to feel very happy and I like it. =) 4. Your speaking parts is very well. 5. Sometimes, you sing too loud : your Anata... after your you better run run... 6. I don't know if you want this but some parts you sing are like rap-speak and SNSD it's like speak-sing. But it's a good style and it quite beautiful. 7. I feel emotion but maybe you can give more =) It's the normal emotion for a song you give =) 8. I think you are self-assured with your voice that is a good thing. You have a beautiful one. Your rating : 76 % You just lost points with your "wrong notes". But the rest is very good. Great cover !
PiggyMelody Retired
Number of posts : 1116 Age : 24 Location : California Registration date : 2011-01-06
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 29th January 2012, 06:48
1. Your voice is very sweet and cute. 2. You have a good rhythm but sometimes you are too fast or too slow. 3. I feel emotion in your cover excepted the first chorus. 4. You have some wrong notes (2min28 to 2min40). Your low notes are perfect ! 5. I have the impression you sing not loud, like a whispering. Maybe you have to try to sing with more dynamism in your voice. 6. The beggining is perfect (verse). 7. For the 2nd verse, you seem stressed, in your voice. You have to be self-assured. 8. I think you have to work on your breath. Because the long notes become wrong and you seems to need breath. Your rating : 9/10. You just have to work on your long notes and your accuracy. Trust your voice and it will be perfect.
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PiggyMelody Retired
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 29th January 2012, 19:11
Thank you for the critic & advice <3
Do you know how I can work on my breathing?
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 29th January 2012, 22:04
PiggyMelody wrote:
Do you know how I can work on my breathing?
My history =) 1. I improve it with Singstar, a game on Ps2 or Ps3. When you have long notes, even if you breathe 3 times instead of breathing just 1, it doesn't matter, do your best and one day, you can sing it with one breathing. 2. I improve it with Sing It, a game, with some exercises. It can help you.
Technicals : 3. Breathe with your «belly» : Take air. Block. Move it in your chest. Move it in your «belly». Breathe out. 4. Sing just one note and count how many seconds you can keep the note. Try with a low note, a high note and any note you want. 5. Light a candle and blow as long as you can. The flame must be here... forever =)) 6. Try to rap =)) lol 7. Take a «tissue» and blow it, "looking the sky", many times. The challenge is : the «tissue» mustn't falling down, on the floor. 8. Go too the swimming pool and apnea.
hope it can help you. Solution is training a lot to sing songs with long notes. =)
Some songs :
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1. California - Phantom Planet 2. Without you - Harry Nilsson/Mariah Carey 3. Don't stop me now - Queen/McFly 4. The Greatest love of all - Whitney Houston 5. I will always love you - Whitney Houston 6. Moves Like Jagger - Maroon 5 ft. Christina Aguilera 7. Stop - Sam Brown 8. All By myself - Eric Carmen/Céline Dion 9. Lose Yourself - Eminem =) 10. Pata pata - Myriam Makeba
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd February 2012, 08:54
1. You have a really good dynamism that makes the song more dynamic than it already was. 2. You have some "unaccurate" notes. Particulary you be in You better. 3. You seem to feel very happy and I like it. =) 4. Your speaking parts is very well. 5. Sometimes, you sing too loud : your Anata... after your you better run run... 6. I don't know if you want this but some parts you sing are like rap-speak and SNSD it's like speak-sing. But it's a good style and it quite beautiful. 7. I feel emotion but maybe you can give more =) It's the normal emotion for a song you give =) 8. I think you are self-assured with your voice that is a good thing. You have a beautiful one. Your rating : 76 % You just lost points with your "wrong notes". But the rest is very good. Great cover !
Thanks for the awesome critic! I really appreciate it alot! I'll use your tips and improve =)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 2nd February 2012, 08:57
1. Oh waw ! I love the end, it's so perfect ! (from 3min35 to the end) 2. I hear more wrong notes in this cover. To work on this aspect, you have to listen to you lot of times and compare to original notes. Maybe a piano can help you : Try to find the original note sung by Adele on the piano and try to find the note you sang. =» Just with your ears. You will develop a musical ear. 3. Your dynamism, I love it. It's a good cover. I think it can be perfect if you work on your accuracy. 4. When you sing with your normal voice and you pass with your head voice, it's awesome !! You have a good talent someone doesn't have. It seems easy to you. 5. You have some notes you «slide». It's probably your style and it's good but some of them are wrong. 6. Some words are eaten, but for me, it's not really important. 7. I feel emotion. Not a lot but it's better than your other cover, for this aspect. 8. You (again) are self-assured I think and I think (yes I say that a lot) that it's the best thing for a person (not only singers). Your rating : 78 % You just lose points for accuracy because the rest is very good. I enjoy your cover even if you did some wrong notes. But because they aren't so bad, my ears are alive and I can listen your cover more than 1 time «loop».
jiroSHExfilesTATU LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 718 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2011-11-30
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 3rd February 2012, 04:56
why on earth doesn't my email update me about this thread??? : cherrii : anyway, i just want to ask what's the difference of normal voice from head voice? is head voice also the falsetto?
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 3rd February 2012, 16:02
jiroSHExfilesTATU wrote:
what's the difference of normal voice from head voice? is head voice also the falsetto?
For me Normal voice is the voice when you sing low notes. And you can sing high notes with it that's why you have to change it in head voice. I probably also called it high voice. I don't really know the English terms, so it's really "transparent to French". I hope you now know the difference =) Normal voice, often speaking voice.
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 3rd February 2012, 19:28
Song : Bye Bye & The Boys Artist : T-ara & SNSD Video or mp3 :https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rr8GxVcTBhk http://www.box.com/s/0k6kj2quypybl0yr3ebl Notation system : last
en français cette fois :D
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 4th February 2012, 03:46
Kelly wrote:
Song : Bye Bye & The Boys Artist : T-ara & SNSD Video or mp3 :https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rr8GxVcTBhk http://www.box.com/s/0k6kj2quypybl0yr3ebl Notation system : last en français cette fois :D
Spoiler:
1. Première impression : waw ! J'adore cette version. 2. C'est dommage que l'instrumental pouvais pas être plus instrumental =) 3. Parfois, ça pourrait être plus synchro avec le fond, mais tu as un bon rythme. 4. On entend un bon dynamisme, mais pour chanter une telle chanson, il en faut =) 5. Ton rap est incroyable. Je suis toujours admirative devant le rap =) 6. Tes notes longues et aiguës sont très bien réussies. 7. J'ai pas vraiment entendu de fausses notes. Peut-être que tu en as fait mais alors ça ne se voit vraiment pas. 8. Tes watching me et stopping me sont vraiment incroyables ! 9. À un moment, tu sembles être essouflée. 10. C'est un cover incroyable. En fait, je pense que c'est bien qu'il y ait les SNSD derrière pour avoir tous les choeurs et harmonies =) Je voulais juste que ta voix soit mise un peu plus en valeur même si on l'entend bien. You rating : 100% C'est un cover parfait. Bravo !
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 4th February 2012, 08:55
1. I'm in love with your oooooooohohohoohoo <3 and of course your yeah and ahahaa (if you know the word in English to say this, tell me please =) ) 2. Your harmonies are so beautiful ! 3. The mix with your voice and harmonies are perfect. 4. Your voice is "sure" and you sing so well. 5. I heard some wrong notes but because it's a awesome cover, we don't hear them too much. 6. I think one passage is not beautiful 3min10-3min13. It's done quite well but it's agressive. I think you could sing this note in a more beautiful way. //Or maybe it's not the good note. 7. For some notes, I have the impression you need air... Maybe it's something you can work =) 8. You easily sing with your normal (speaking) voice and your high (head) voice. I like it =) 9. I think you can add more emotion. There is emotion but not enough I think. (Yes I often say I think) Your rating : 96% I love your cover. I don't know on what you can work =)
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 5th February 2012, 04:38
1. I'm in love with your oooooooohohohoohoo <3 and of course your yeah and ahahaa (if you know the word in English to say this, tell me please =) ) 2. Your harmonies are so beautiful ! 3. The mix with your voice and harmonies are perfect. 4. Your voice is "sure" and you sing so well. 5. I heard some wrong notes but because it's a awesome cover, we don't hear them too much. 6. I think one passage is not beautiful 3min10-3min13. It's done quite well but it's agressive. I think you could sing this note in a more beautiful way. //Or maybe it's not the good note. 7. For some notes, I have the impression you need air... Maybe it's something you can work =) 8. You easily sing with your normal (speaking) voice and your high (head) voice. I like it =) 9. I think you can add more emotion. There is emotion but not enough I think. (Yes I often say I think) Your rating : 96% I love your cover. I don't know on what you can work =)
thank you! i struggle on high notes. thanks to the mixer haha =)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 6th February 2012, 17:22
OMG Thank you Annih !!!!! :D
PiggyMelody Retired
Number of posts : 1116 Age : 24 Location : California Registration date : 2011-01-06
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 12th February 2012, 05:41
1. Your voice is very cute ! 2. Your accuracy is very good. Some wrong notes in the end of some sentences. 3. You have good high notes and low notes. 4. You have a great dynamism, so it's an happy cover. 5. Hum... It's complicated to critic a duet =)) Because if I say the mix is very good, and if it's not you who have done it... 6. I feel love in your voice, it's very nice for this cover =) Your rating : 95% Your voice is awesome and mainly accurate.
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 16th February 2012, 03:09
( Au moins la tu aura pas de mal a critiquer ;), c'est en Francais lache toi ma petite Anih ♥) Je te ne caches pas que je penses d'avance que ce n'est pas mon meilleur cover ^_^
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 16th February 2012, 18:31
1. Waw ! T'as voix est mélodieuse, agréable à écouter (mais ça je le savais déjà =) ) 2. J'aime ton assurance dans la voix, tu la contrôle parfaitement. Quelques fois tu as l'air de douter, c'est juste que les paroles sont plus difficiles à ce passage, n'est-ce pas ? 3. Ta partie rap est bonne, mais («= il fallait le faire apparaitre quelque part celui-là) tu as l'air d'avoir peur de rapper. Je pense que tu as une bonne aptitude à rapper. En t'entrainant, tu pourras chanter comme Eminem =) Désolée, c'est mon exemple de rappeur par défaut =) 4. Si je peux commenter la vidéo, =), tu es très belle, et toi au moins, tu est présentable devant les projecteurs. Moi je chante en pijama et je ne me coiffe jamais (même pour aller en cours =)). 5. Tes fins de "phrases" sont plutôt fortes par rapport au reste de la phrase, d'habitude c'est le contraire car on est censé ne plus avoir de souffle. 6. La niveau du volume de ta voix et de l'instru est très bon. L'un de cache pas l'autre. 7. Je pense que la respiration est l'un de tes points forts car je ne t'entends pas du tout respirer =) Ah moins que tu as traité le son avec un logiciel et enlevé les respirations. Mais c'est bon pareil =) Ta note : Excellent. Désolée d'avoir abusé de «=)» dans la critique =) À améliorer, l'assurance dans la partie rap.
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 16th February 2012, 22:49
1. Waw ! T'as voix est mélodieuse, agréable à écouter (mais ça je le savais déjà =) ) 2. J'aime ton assurance dans la voix, tu la contrôle parfaitement. Quelques fois tu as l'air de douter, c'est juste que les paroles sont plus difficiles à ce passage, n'est-ce pas ? 3. Ta partie rap est bonne, mais («= il fallait le faire apparaitre quelque part celui-là) tu as l'air d'avoir peur de rapper. Je pense que tu as une bonne aptitude à rapper. En t'entrainant, tu pourras chanter comme Eminem =) Désolée, c'est mon exemple de rappeur par défaut =) 4. Si je peux commenter la vidéo, =), tu es très belle, et toi au moins, tu est présentable devant les projecteurs. Moi je chante en pijama et je ne me coiffe jamais (même pour aller en cours =)). 5. Tes fins de "phrases" sont plutôt fortes par rapport au reste de la phrase, d'habitude c'est le contraire car on est censé ne plus avoir de souffle. 6. La niveau du volume de ta voix et de l'instru est très bon. L'un de cache pas l'autre. 7. Je pense que la respiration est l'un de tes points forts car je ne t'entends pas du tout respirer =) Ah moins que tu as traité le son avec un logiciel et enlevé les respirations. Mais c'est bon pareil =) Ta note : Excellent. Désolée d'avoir abusé de «=)» dans la critique =) À améliorer, l'assurance dans la partie rap.
Ah merci Anih ♥ c'est gentil d'avoir pris le temps de critiquer mon cover ^___^ T'en fais pas va la plupart du temps niveau physique devant c'est nickel mais derrière c'est flemmardasse profonde...Mais de toute façon toi t'est toujours belle pas coiffée et tout le reste ! Bref ! Oui en effet il y a des passage niveau parole ou j'improvise un peu et certain endroit ou les paroles sont pas faciles :'(...Mais niveau rap hihi c'est relativement moyen...J'hesite j'ai peur de me tromper ! Par ailleurs même quand je chante normal quand ya un instrumental et pas de voix en fond je stresse et j'ose pas "me lacher" tandis que quand ya une vois j'essaie de "me surpasser" c'est louche je sais ^___^. Concernant la respiration je ne sais pas si ca a jouer mais j'ai reduit les bruit avec adobe audition...J'ai voulu faire une reduction de la respiration mais j'ai échoué donc j'ai laissé comme cela...Voila voila... T'en fais pas pour tes "=)" j'abuse aussi beaucoup des smyley dumoins avant ^___^ ! En tous cas ma petite Anih j'espère te revoir très prochainement et je t'aime très fort et vous me manquer tous gros bisous et ton cover en anglais (J'ai oublié le titre T_T) étais super même si j'ai oublié de commenté aller gros bisous ♥