[OPEN] Underwoodrockz's Critic Corner

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

First topic message reminder :

Well Hello there.

im quite interested when received a message from panda lulu to open a thread here.

here i am. im underwoodrockz at youtube. u can call me amer.

im not a good singer, but i do have a good ear. i can even hear if my recording got any off-pitch part but usually im lazy to fix it. hahahha

if u really want me to comment on ur singing, feel free to do so. but dont feel offended when i say quite a harsh words towards ur singing. n if u want to counter about it, feel free to do so too... hamtaro1

cheers..

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Hara wrote:

ouu i feel like posting now ^^

Spoiler:

please be supppppper honest i would like to improve :)

Thanks <3 luvya

OMG, 3 songs in a post.... : jedi :

:

gee song

1. gee gee gee gee gee baby baby baby <--- flat

2. at 1st yoona/sunny part <--- sunny part is too flat.. u didnt reach the note.

3. at sica part also a bit flat at 0:50 - 0:55

4. chorus not so ok especially at 1:16 - 1:20

5. u enter sooyoung's part a bit earlier than the music and its a bit flat at 1:35

6. seohyun/hyoyeon part also same. flat at hyun's part.

7. tae's part also flat. same like sica's part b4...

8. chorus seems repeated the same mistake.. nunbit.. yanggi... part..

9. flat at beginning of yuri's part.

10. tae/sica : its so flat for sica's part harmonization

11. oh yeah <-- sounds annoying..

12. improvisation for tae/sica part at the last chorus is way to FLAT N DAMN BAD...

1.5/5

****************************************************************

other cover will be reviewed later..

Guest

Hi, can you crit me please? ^^

This is only available on box right now, because im not releasing it to youtube until later XD;;
Sorry about that~

Bekah (After School) - Take Me To The Place
http://www.box.net/shared/apjmmjsnbnbtsif1bxre

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 1080 Age : 36 Registration date : 2011-07-28

Could you give a quick run through of this collab please? It's their debut together ^^

It's Sunny Hill's "Pray"

Lyrics Split:

Spoiler:

I'm quite ready to admit that I was probably the weakest link here :oppsies:

LTS Raindrop Number of posts : 2599 Age : 27 Registration date : 2010-07-27

Quote :: i dowan to comment on others much but i do like the girl who sang hannah part..

Thankss i sang Hannah's part :)
and for my gee cover i agree will work on that ^^ Thankss
please take ur time with the other u you dont have to do it any time soon ^^
seriouslyy thanks alot this will help :)

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Hara wrote:

ouu i feel like posting now ^^

Spoiler:

please be supppppper honest i would like to improve :)

Thanks <3 luvya

Queen

1. ladies, <-- start of with nasal, n at 0:23 listen<--- harp a bit...

2. the 1st part seems weak n gurae2 at 0:35 is bit fast than the music...

3. 0:46 <--- sharp a bit

4. wake up <--- some time a bit fast at chorus..

5. 1:10 sharp.

6. 1:28 seems u hold ur voice. just project it..

7. 1:56 <-- same prob, gurae2 <-- sharp

8. chorus have the same problem, fast n sharp here n there.

overall, u should project ur voice more. sometimes u tend to be sharp n not following the tempo of the song.

i'll back off so you can live better

1. start off better :)

2. 0:53 n 0:55/56 u didnt reach the notes well

3. rap part is juz ok..

4. 1:32 u r fast bit

5. chorus, the same part as b4 u didnt reach

6. 2:05 - 2:10 certain part sounds weird n u didnt reach the notes well..

7. 2:21 - 2:25 hohohoho... its flat much...

8. last chorus has so much flat parts especially 2:50.. aiyo...

overall, works harder on high notes n pls sing in a correct tempo.. :)

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

X-IA wrote:: aha mianhae, didn't mean for you to listen to all 10 minutes XD it was the only relatively recent thing i'd done though >_< anywho thanks for the critique i'll see whati can do to improve ^-^ [though i'm not sure how to make my voice...special? o.O]

haha. special means try to find something dat suits ur voice so dat it will sounded great with ur voice :).

sometimes, the specialty in our voice was given by God. its gifted. not many people can sing all genre of music :) if u dont hv one, just make sure the song n ur voice are blended well :)

Guest

Underwoodrockz wrote:: haha. special means try to find something dat suits ur voice so dat it will sounded great with ur voice :).

sometimes, the specialty in our voice was given by God. its gifted. not many people can sing all genre of music :) if u dont hv one, just make sure the song n ur voice are blended well :)

oooh i see then! thanks, i shall keep that in mind for my future projects! ^-^

Guest

hello can you please critic this cover? it's a duet cover :)

lyric is here
thanks before :)

Underwoodrockz wrote:

Hyuriko wrote:: Hi under !
I really like your critic so i submit my video ^_^
i remake Aya hirano ~ god knows in solo :3

www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfZ7hVY4Mbo
Thankyu :3

Lyrics here

0:52 - kurenai <-- flat...

0:55 - 1:00 = Muku ni ikiru tame ni furimukazu <--- muku, ikiru is flat.

1:02 - 1:36 = Yowasa yue ni tamashii kowasarenu you ni
My way kasanaru yo <-- this part is mostly flat... :)

Thanks to critize me but can i have note please ^__^ ?

Guest

Critique me as well? :) It's a bit shaky, but I hope it's okay!
Don't worry about offending me~ :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVpv_9QLWIo

{P.S. Timing is a bit off as well :P}

Guest

Hi there~! I hope you won't mind to tell what you think of my very first cover recording :

I know I will lose a lot of points in mixing Q_Q but yeah I will improve with more honest critiques. SO, fire away~!!! XD

Your first customer is back. ^^
五天幾年 - 林凡
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K3C4eGfMqFc&feature=player_embedded
Lyrics : http://chinese.globallyrics.com/archives/4055

You don't have to listen to the whole thing, just half is okay ^^

Please critic my cover too ^^
please be as honest as possible 'kay..I know I lack a lot as a singer and I want to be better ^^

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

hi all. will start to critic back on this week.... hamtaro1

sorry was a way for a while.

im too busy with my work..

will try to comment at least once a week... Mihn

LTS Raindrop Number of posts : 4753 Age : 40 Registration date : 2008-07-15

Ooo good to see you back Amer !

Thank you for giving more time to critic here in the house, you're all time welcome^^

Thanks so much ^____^

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

JinBonBon wrote:

ready to hear my opinion? haha...

take this...

[OPEN] Underwoodrockz's Critic Corner - Page 2 Tai_na10

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Evonne wrote:: hey my fellow Malaysian, critique me too pls well ya ;D

hello fellow malaysian. which part of malaysia are u in? here i tell u honestly... :P

[OPEN] Underwoodrockz's Critic Corner - Page 2 I_ll_t10

Hi under it been a long time ^__^

Can u critic my cover please ? :3

Hi :)
Can you critique me please?

Do you do groupdubs?

Critique please~ ;D

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Brinny-chan wrote:: Hi, can you crit me please? ^^

This is only available on box right now, because im not releasing it to youtube until later XD;;
Sorry about that~

Bekah (After School) - Take Me To The Place
http://www.box.net/shared/apjmmjsnbnbtsif1bxre

sorry for take a long time.

1. just a very normal voice.
2. no dynamics in ur voice.
3. u easily get off tunes (sharp a bit) at the end of ur notes. especially on the chorus.
4. if u can put a vibrato at the end of certain part, will be better.

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Mihn wrote:

Could you give a quick run through of this collab please? It's their debut together ^^

It's Sunny Hill's "Pray"

Lyrics Split:

Spoiler:

I'm quite ready to admit that I was probably the weakest link here :oppsies:

OMG OMG OMG!!!

VERY NICE.

all of the voices in this song is soooooooo soothing!!!!!!

i like it so much...

but it seems most of u prefer to use the head voices instead of ur chest voice.

i prefer if the chest voice is being put at certain part instead of the head voice..

ani ani ani aniya!! <---- i love this part so much

lalalalalaala <---- i think its too loud and sometimes made me shocked when suddenly u guys sings this part..

overall, one of the best cover in my column.

4/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Guest wrote:: hello can you please critic this cover? it's a duet cover :)

lyric is here
thanks before :)

copyright prob. cannot view this. sorry.

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Guest wrote:: Critique me as well? :) It's a bit shaky, but I hope it's okay!
Don't worry about offending me~ :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVpv_9QLWIo

{P.S. Timing is a bit off as well :P}

the video is removed. cannot view. sorry :)

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Guest wrote:: Hi there~! I hope you won't mind to tell what you think of my very first cover recording :

I know I will lose a lot of points in mixing Q_Q but yeah I will improve with more honest critiques. SO, fire away~!!! XD

1. in the beginning, the music is louder than ur voice. i cant hear ur voice much.
2. there is dynamics in ur voice. nice.
3. the high note is quite ok.
4. if u can hit those high notes with ur chest voice, would be better.

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

PiggyMelody wrote:: Your first customer is back. ^^
五天幾年 - 林凡
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K3C4eGfMqFc&feature=player_embedded
Lyrics : http://chinese.globallyrics.com/archives/4055

You don't have to listen to the whole thing, just half is okay ^^

1. 1st thing i notice, u r cute. hahahaha
2. however girl, i dont think u have a great talent.
3. ur voice is very2 common and u seems a bit rush than the music.
4. there were so many off tunes parts.

1.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Rie wrote:: Please critic my cover too ^^
please be as honest as possible 'kay..I know I lack a lot as a singer and I want to be better ^^

1. u dont have a talent to rap. ur voice to soft to do that.
2. u can sing. but its a bit nasal on certain parts.
3. the dynamics is ok. not really good.
4. the last part after rap is a bit flat.

3/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Hyuriko wrote:: Hi under it been a long time ^__^

Can u critic my cover please ? :3

its flat all over the song!!! the key is not correct. i cannot finish it. its FLAATTTT!!!!

but its getting ok after the 1st chorus. but overall, its bad. flat for the whole notes is bad for a singer.

1/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

bee wrote:: Hi :)
Can you critique me please?

Do you do groupdubs?

1. normal n nothing interesting.
2. i just impressed on how u can sings the fast song without getting off beat.

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Shiori wrote:: Critique please~ ;D

1. the lalalala in the beginning is horrible.
2. i just think ur voice is not dat good. (sorry)
3. its sharp and flat at the bridge.
4. the chorus is ok.
5. the second voice (the harmony on the chorus) is good

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

HELLO GUYS.

sorry for being silent for a long time.

at this moment, I have commented on all of the songs in this thread. (hopefully i not missed it) check it on page 2 for the comments.

but here i have a few things to say :

1. i dont really like japanese songs, so most of the time, i hear the 1st half of the song, if ur voice cannot captured my ear, i will skip it.

2. i just think, most of the users here didnt do any improvisation to the song. u guys just followed how the original singer sing that song. so, there's no originality in ur singing.

3. im sorry if my comment offends u guys in anyways.

thank you for visiting my corner....

cheerrrrssss!!!

LTS Raindrop Number of posts : 4753 Age : 40 Registration date : 2008-07-15

You did a good job here Amer^^

Your topic is not a praise center ^___^

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Kitkat wrote:: You did a good job here Amer^^

Your topic is not a praise center ^___^

i do praise if the singer deserve it ^______-

Critique~?

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Shiori wrote:: Critique~?

1. the start is so so so so so shaky...

2. its flat on the second line of the songs.

3. the chorus is flat and sharp. u cannot hit the notes.

4. once u try to reach the high notes, its going sharp.

5. ur voice is nothing great.

1.5/5

Song : Dong Jie
Artist : JJ Lin

Can you critique this please ? :D

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28

hi!~ i wanna see what you think about my cover here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPTY0SDao2Y&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))

I'm aware that some parts are off-beat.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ff5FjRNoarE&feature=g-upl

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

AnihJourney wrote:: Song : Dong Jie
Artist : JJ Lin

Can you critique this please ? :D

1. ur voice is very2 common n normal. there is nothing special.

2. u r ok with the pitch which is good.

3. there is a bit off beat at chorus.

4. the harmonization is quite good.

2.3/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

dnxo14 wrote:: hi!~ i wanna see what you think about my cover here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPTY0SDao2Y&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))

1. i really hate to hear any acappella without any harmonization.

2. ur voice is ok for me. but since im not familiar with the song, i think some part is a bit sharp at the chorus.

3. do take a higher note if u want to sing a female song. following an original key for me is not very nice since u will only show ur bass voice rather than ur original voice...

2.4/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

cloudymelody wrote:: I'm aware that some parts are off-beat.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ff5FjRNoarE&feature=g-upl

1. ur low note is very bad.

2. the music is to low and the voice is to loud.

3. ur high note is not solid. it is quite shaky.

4. the off beat part is really true. towards the end, its getting more bad.

5. i have problem with ur pronunciation. it sounded so weird although i dont understand korean too.

6. words with ended with yo... or O seems not rounded. its very2 bold and not nice.

2.2/5

Song: Chain
Artist: Sayaka Oohara

Song: Heaven
Artist: Ailee
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wb2Ygjo8HQk&feature=g-upl

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28

Underwoodrockz wrote:

dnxo14 wrote:: hi!~ i wanna see what you think about my cover here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GPTY0SDao2Y&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
thank you :))

1. i really hate to hear any acappella without any harmonization.

2. ur voice is ok for me. but since im not familiar with the song, i think some part is a bit sharp at the chorus.

3. do take a higher note if u want to sing a female song. following an original key for me is not very nice since u will only show ur bass voice rather than ur original voice...

2.4/5

hmmm .. this is actually a male original .. if im not mistaken, the only difference with IU's rendition is the tempo .. kekekeke ..anyway, thanks for the review :)

omo! i really love your critique! please critique my "hello to myself" cover :D

this is the FULL (mixed) acapella: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWhfHzxmwpk
this is the short version (not mixed, no effects, coz i didn't know how to add effects myself. LOL): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adHovNxnMfA

advanced thank you!!!

Song : Volume Up
Artist : 4 Minute
Link :
It's a duet cover with AmeliaaBoos . Yeah , She's my real life friend too . :)
I took Hyuna and Jiyoon's parts while AmeliaaBoos took Sohyun , Gayoon and Jihyun .
Incase you would like to see the lyrics , It's here :)

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Shiori wrote:: Song: Chain
Artist: Sayaka Oohara

1. u started well.

2. ur voice sounds very unique here.

3. i dont hv much too say here as the song is a bit weird for me. there is some off key but its so minor.

2.9/5

Song : All Happy ; Artist : A-Fu

Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukK6JNWUUDo
Lyrics : http://top10pinyinlyrics.blogspot.com/2012/03/fu-deng-fu-ru-all-happy.html
Thanks :D

Song: Twinkle
Artist: TTS
Link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQxIKvnNy7M&list=FLQQse9tirSr_-4v-h9OClmg&feature=mh_lolz

Please :)

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