[OPEN] Underwoodrockz's Critic Corner

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

First topic message reminder :

Well Hello there.

im quite interested when received a message from panda lulu to open a thread here.

here i am. im underwoodrockz at youtube. u can call me amer.

im not a good singer, but i do have a good ear. i can even hear if my recording got any off-pitch part but usually im lazy to fix it. hahahha

if u really want me to comment on ur singing, feel free to do so. but dont feel offended when i say quite a harsh words towards ur singing. n if u want to counter about it, feel free to do so too... hamtaro1

cheers..

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

cloudymelody wrote:: Song: Heaven
Artist: Ailee
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wb2Ygjo8HQk&feature=g-upl

1. certain parts in the beginning is a bit flat.

2. heaven heaven heaven <-- most of this part is a bit off beat.

3. 2nd half of the song u seems a bit breathy.

4. certain of the high notes u can hit it very well but certain of it sounds a bit sharp.

5. last part is not very nice ending. haha.

3/5 :)

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

jiroSHExfilesTATU wrote:: omo! i really love your critique! please critique my "hello to myself" cover :D

this is the FULL (mixed) acapella: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWhfHzxmwpk
this is the short version (not mixed, no effects, coz i didn't know how to add effects myself. LOL): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adHovNxnMfA

advanced thank you!!!

i heard the second link as the 1st one too much echo, it annoys me. haha.

1. u r Filipino rite? btw, i love carol banawa. hahaha.

2. u started quite ok, but on the chorus, most of the time u got off tune. especially on chorus HELLO part.

3. the ending is quite nice.

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

AliciaBoos wrote:: Song : Volume Up
Artist : 4 Minute
Link :
It's a duet cover with AmeliaaBoos . Yeah , She's my real life friend too . :)
I took Hyuna and Jiyoon's parts while AmeliaaBoos took Sohyun , Gayoon and Jihyun .
Incase you would like to see the lyrics , It's here :)

1. 1st note already off tune.

2. after hyuna's part, u got really off beat.

3. the long note that u hold is not nice. its more to scream rather than singing.

4. the chorus is quite nice.

5. ur head voice is bad.

6. 2nd time also hv off best prob. getting worst.

1.6/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

PiggyMelody wrote:: Song : All Happy ; Artist : A-Fu

Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukK6JNWUUDo
Lyrics : http://top10pinyinlyrics.blogspot.com/2012/03/fu-deng-fu-ru-all-happy.html
Thanks :D

1. 1st verse is a off beat and off tunes too.

2. 1:37 -1:41 sounded weird.

3. ur singing is really boring on bcoz it repeated most of the same verse but u didnt improvised it. it feels like u sing once and just paste it to the other same part.

4. ur voice is nothing special actually (for my ears la. )

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Rie wrote:: Song: Twinkle
Artist: TTS
Link:

1. my fav song. im sone also :P

2. started ok, but at fany and seo's part, a bit off.

3. chorus is nice.

4. 2nd part of tae's is a bit off. u cant hit it right.

5. at bridge, tae's part also u cant hit it.

6. using a head voice to replace the chest voice for the last high note is good actually but ur head voice is not strong enough.

btw, nice try.

2.3/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

JasmineMarshiana wrote:: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQxIKvnNy7M&list=FLQQse9tirSr_-4v-h9OClmg&feature=mh_lolz

Please :)

a twinke song again.

1. so shock to hear the intro. SO NICE.

2. at fany part, u seem ok. but at 1st seo's part, why it sounded weird. is it a diff person singing or u were using ur head voice?

3. the chorus is nice. :)

4. u improvised fany's high note. its good attempt.

5. at tae's 2nd part, i can sure it is a head voice. nice.

6. the bridge part is quite ok.

7. but u seems scared to project ur voice at the high note.

8. ur head voice is not strong but still acceptable.

overall, u hv nice voice and u do look like a pretty version of joey yung on the avatar.

3.2/5

Hellow :D

Can you critique this please ?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JsCARc29AY

When you say nothing at all - Ronan Keating.

Thanks

Please critique this cover! Thanks :)

Spoiler:

thanks for reviewing! oh, how did you know carol banawa? you're malay, i suppose?

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

AnihJourney wrote:: Hellow :D

Can you critique this please ?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JsCARc29AY

When you say nothing at all - Ronan Keating.

Thanks

1. if u can make the key higher it would be better.

2. a bit off at 1.58

3. there is no improvisation, a bit boring when it keeps repeating

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

isawing wrote:: Please critique this cover! Thanks :)

1. the male voice is quite good.

2. u also quite good here.

3. if u could to the harmonization at the male voice, it would be nicer.

4. certain part is too low for u. so, if he can sing that part while u do the harmony, it will sounded nice.

3/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

jiroSHExfilesTATU wrote:

Spoiler:

thanks for reviewing! oh, how did you know carol banawa? you're malay, i suppose?

yeah. im malay. i've watched one of her drama here in malaysia. bituin if im not mistaken.

then, fall in love with her voice. i heard she lives in canada and married with a daughter now. haih. what a waste not to sing again. haha

besides that, i also like kristine hermosa. these 2 ladies are great in their own field. haha

Underwoodrockz wrote:

isawing wrote:: Please critique this cover! Thanks :)

1. the male voice is quite good.

2. u also quite good here.

3. if u could to the harmonization at the male voice, it would be nicer.

4. certain part is too low for u. so, if he can sing that part while u do the harmony, it will sounded nice.

3/5

Thanks for the critique! Yeah he wanted to sing the harmonization parts. So I gave it to him.
Yeah certain parts were too low for me, but we couldn't up the pitch anymore or it would make me go off key at the high notes lol.

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

isawing wrote:

Underwoodrockz wrote:

isawing wrote:: Please critique this cover! Thanks :)

1. the male voice is quite good.

2. u also quite good here.

3. if u could to the harmonization at the male voice, it would be nicer.

4. certain part is too low for u. so, if he can sing that part while u do the harmony, it will sounded nice.

3/5

Thanks for the critique! Yeah he wanted to sing the harmonization parts. So I gave it to him.
Yeah certain parts were too low for me, but we couldn't up the pitch anymore or it would make me go off key at the high notes lol.

owh, just make sure next time u have to take the harmonization part so that it would be better cover. :)

Hi under ! I'm happy that u came back !
I love ur Critic so much !
Can u critic my cover Sistar Loving u please :) ?

Don't be affraid of my weird face...
Thankyu ♥

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Hyuriko wrote:: Hi under ! I'm happy that u came back !
I love ur Critic so much !
Can u critic my cover Sistar Loving u please :) ?

Don't be affraid of my weird face...
Thankyu ♥

1. u r beautiful :)

2. u started it well..

3. the chorus is just ok. nothing great.

4. the rap part is worst. u rush there.

5. towards the end, i can hear more of ur head voice which is quite ok.

6. the harmonization that u made is so-so

7. u ended it very soothingly..

3/5

*could u pls cover Akai Unmei - Momoe Yamaguchi. I think it would suit ur voice*

Can you critique this please :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPGrAyBq0b8
Venus - Shinhwa.

Thanks ! :D

Underwoodrockz wrote:

Hyuriko wrote:: Hi under ! I'm happy that u came back !
I love ur Critic so much !
Can u critic my cover Sistar Loving u please :) ?

Don't be affraid of my weird face...
Thankyu ♥

1. u r beautiful :)

2. u started it well..

3. the chorus is just ok. nothing great.

4. the rap part is worst. u rush there.

5. towards the end, i can hear more of ur head voice which is quite ok.

6. the harmonization that u made is so-so

7. u ended it very soothingly..

3/5

*could u pls cover Akai Unmei - Momoe Yamaguchi. I think it would suit ur voice*

Thanks under =^__^= *Blushing*

I perfecly know that my rap suck but i was would like to try... But it's not very good :/...
I hope that i can become better... Because these time i always think that i sing very very badly XD
I probably take singing lesson next year... ^__^

Thanks for your critic ♥

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

AnihJourney wrote:: Can you critique this please :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPGrAyBq0b8
Venus - Shinhwa.

Thanks ! :D

1. if u make the key higher, it would be better.

2. ur low notes is bad bcoz of the key difference between male n female

3. the rap sounded nice.

4. when i hear the chorus for 2nd time, i think it sounded quite addictive. :)

5. 2:20 - 2:30 was a bit off beat.

6. the 2nd time rap also good.

7. 3rd time rap is a bit rushing.

overall, it was quite a good attempt :)

3.2/5

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWN7w80S1uo&feature=g-upl

Nagging-IU ft. Seulong

Erm... I used the instrumental with Seulong's voice. I sang the girl's part. Please critique, thanks!

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

cloudymelody wrote:: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWN7w80S1uo&feature=g-upl

Nagging-IU ft. Seulong

Erm... I used the instrumental with Seulong's voice. I sang the girl's part. Please critique, thanks!

1. u started with a shaky voice.

2. u cant hit the notes with ur chest voice.

3. but i really impress although u cant hit the note with ur chest voice, it didnt go off key on the head voice :)

4. 1:39 - u seems like screaming a bit.

5. but i dont see any big impact improvement. its almost the same as ur last cover.

3/5

Please critique this !
I sang Yoseob/Daehyun's parts ! [Which is ALL of the singing parts]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nf-pPyn-PUQ&list=UUGyroK7mD0J3lvSkjhu8FcA&index=1&feature=plcp

Re hi under can u critic this ? Please ^__^? It will be kind
Song : Day by day
artist : T-ara

And if u can eventually critic this too ? Sorry for the work :p
Song: I love u
Artist : 2NE1

Heyyy please critic my covers haha!
I did all the cover for fun so they sound a bit pitchy xD

Oh and im not a good mixer
this is my first time mixing haha!
so yeah xD

[Navi - On The Road] Acapella
https://www.box.com/s/58c787a64c49c0b88429

[2NE1 - Lonely]
https://www.box.com/s/ee5926333ea80b34cd73

thank youuu

ranmakiss

It's quite new so I might have made some flaws.... :P
Please be harsh ;)

LTS Snowflake Number of posts : 177 Age : 28 Registration date : 2012-06-13

:) I'm not a very good singer..... So this is just a little bit xD Aha, Please be harsh on me too :D !!! announcement

Hopefully this is okay ^^

Hallo Amer ! I think it's the first time I post a cover here... Could you critic my last cover please? (^0^)/

https://youtu.be/GtvomZyBh1I

I know my voice is boring... I needed several breaks while mixing my cover xD

Hello :D
Can you critisize these covers please ?
B.A.P Mashup : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

and

Day By Day - T-ara : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNw7CTPF9wU

Thanks a lot <3

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 404 Age : 33 Registration date : 2010-09-17

Hello!

Please critique my cover:

https://youtu.be/F6yf12RvEG8

Hi Amer! I know you're pretty backed up, but uhm, could you please critique my cover when you're free? :D

Spoiler:

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Alicia wrote:: Please critique this !
I sang Yoseob/Daehyun's parts ! [Which is ALL of the singing parts]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nf-pPyn-PUQ&list=UUGyroK7mD0J3lvSkjhu8FcA&index=1&feature=plcp

- the singing part audio quality is bad. the mic is too loud i think.
- the rap part is good
- the singing part is sometimes off beat and off key also.
- just ok. the song also not catchy.

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Hyuriko wrote:: Re hi under can u critic this ? Please ^__^? It will be kind
Song : Day by day
artist : T-ara

And if u can eventually critic this too ? Sorry for the work :p
Song: I love u
Artist : 2NE1

- the rap was horrible.it was off beat
- the singing part also just ok.
- i think ur voice did not suit this song.
- about the pronunciation, i cant comment much as im not korean but i think there's a lot of wrong lyrics being pronounced.

1.3/5

song : i love u

- its private.

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Anisxo wrote:: Heyyy please critic my covers haha!
I did all the cover for fun so they sound a bit pitchy xD

Oh and im not a good mixer
this is my first time mixing haha!
so yeah xD

[Navi - On The Road] Acapella
https://www.box.com/s/58c787a64c49c0b88429

[2NE1 - Lonely]
https://www.box.com/s/ee5926333ea80b34cd73

thank youuu

navi - on the road.

- i dont really like acapella.
- i dont know the song, so cannot judge much but i can spot a bit off key here and there
- overall, u have quite nice voice

2/5

lonely - 2ne1

- started with offkey
- the low note part is not good.
- chorus was ok
- 2nd part a lot of off key and off beat some more.
- the best part when u sang the lonely part. it have dynamics there.

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

JasmineMarshiana wrote:: It's quite new so I might have made some flaws.... :P
Please be harsh ;)

wang le.

- u sang a song from one of my fav singer.
- u r so good. better than rainie i think
- suddenly ur volume of ur voice slower at chorus. its better if the voice be a bit loud there.
- i think u quite hold ur voice a bit at chorus. just project it. it will sound better.
- overall, hands down. great voice, beautiful face (according to the pic).
- i can listen to it all day. its good!!

4/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

HanisBack wrote:: :) I'm not a very good singer..... So this is just a little bit xD Aha, Please be harsh on me too :D !!!

- im not familiar with the song
- u sounded ok. ur voice is soothing.
- its a bit nasal and the chorus is not that good
- ur head voice also not strong enough.

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

cloudymelody wrote:: Hopefully this is okay ^^

- u must have a big voice and range for this song. unfortunately u didnt hv that big voice.
- but u did hit the note in the chorus. :)
- if u hv a vibrato added, it will be better.
- 2nd chorus, u started screaming a bit.

2/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Liza wrote:: Hallo Amer ! I think it's the first time I post a cover here... Could you critic my last cover please? (^0^)/

https://youtu.be/GtvomZyBh1I

I know my voice is boring... I needed several breaks while mixing my cover xD

- not familiar with the song.
- nice start. its so soothing.
- the chorus was not that good. off key and off beat.
- btw, this song is only good if u want to sleep.. huhu

2.4/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

AnihJourney wrote:: Hello :D
Can you critisize these covers please ?
B.A.P Mashup : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

and

Day By Day - T-ara : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNw7CTPF9wU

Thanks a lot <3

B.A.P Mashup

- ur voice is not strong enough for the first song.
- the mash up is quite ok.
- but i feel like want to stop it half way. its so weak.

2/5

day by day

- the rap part was so-so
- i really like u used the head voice when u cant hit the note. it means u know ur voice capability
- but the cover was just ok
- he 2nd rap part is quite good.

2.5/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

kikiworld10 wrote:: Hello!

Please critique my cover:

https://youtu.be/F6yf12RvEG8

- im not familiar with the song
- started with off key. and its getting off as u sing more.
- especially on low notes. its obvious.
- ur voice is just ok. vibrato should be an added value if u have it.

2.3/5

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Aliteralid wrote:

Hi Amer! I know you're pretty backed up, but uhm, could you please critique my cover when you're free? :D

Spoiler:

Because of You by After School

- my goodness, the rapper was too good.
- the singing part ooo ooo part is good but if u reduce the effects a bit, it will be damn good,
- the audio quality is sounded pro.
- no doubt, u r better in rapping.
- the high note seems like u scream than singing :)

3.3/5

Back again with more snsd cover ^^ please critic this..

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Rie wrote:: Back again with more snsd cover ^^ please critic this..

- im a sone. so, it might be harsh. haha.
- starts with nasal at oooo....
- at certain parts, i cant listen to u but its more to soshi's voices.
- at certain part, u really sound like tiffany's voice.
- the voice is suddenly slowed down.. then, back to normal and repeatedly vice versa.
- but u dont have any pitch issue. which is good.

3.4/5

Hi! could you please review? thank you! ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XM3NwAzQJHk

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

PiggyMelody wrote:: Hi! could you please review? thank you! ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XM3NwAzQJHk

- one of my fav song.
- started badly with wrong key and off beat.
- 2nd verse quite ok.
- chorus is not good
- ending part is one of the best part in the song but u kinda ruined it.
- the harmony quite ok.

2.1/5

Hi, can you critique this for me? xD
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRen0z2_vyo

and

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BffsAjhRes

Please may you critic my cover:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wd-P3UDTjVQ
Thank you very much. I realise that after posting there are many parts that sound flat but that's my fault ^^

can I have a critic please ? : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSBIg9xfrWg

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 86 Age : 29 Registration date : 2012-04-26

Hi! I have a super short cover of Justin Bieber's "Boyfriend" (Girlfriend) that I'd love to have you critique!
Thank you so much for you time! :)

LTS Firefly Number of posts : 71 Age : 35 Registration date : 2011-09-13

Cassie wrote:: Hi, can you critique this for me? xD
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRen0z2_vyo

and

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BffsAjhRes

little turtle

- nothing great. just normal voice.
1.2/5

infinite - a person like me

- started with a bad key. wrong.
- why dont u raise the key? u guys seems in misery for the low note.
- 1:17 WAS SO BAD.
- 1:55 - 2:05 was just ok
- they r too many off key part and i really dont like it.
- raise the key to match with ur voice.

1/5

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