[CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D
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Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 29th April 2012, 14:26
Hi guys.. I'm not a profesionnal of singing but i'll try to critize u ! I'll try too to write you all i think in english...If you don't understand something please tell me ! I sing since i'm was 14/15 years so 4 years ^^...I have do lots of mistake before to use my venter to sing...(Sing throught my nose , Throught my throat)...So i can see if you do this mistake ^^...I think i'm just honest i said what i think, i don't want to lie to people and said something for people be happy it's not the good way...I think the critic is the best way for progress...But i can't critic your pronunciation in Korean or chinesse because i can see properly in these language i'm better for critic japanesse pronunciation... But i critic all language !
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Lena LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 444 Age : 27 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2012-04-13
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 29th April 2012, 14:36
Name : LeNa Song : Princess and Prince Charming Artist : Sunny Hill Language : Korean Your thinking about your performance : I think I sucked :DDD Iam KOTA btw
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 29th April 2012, 14:52
Hmmm...I can say lots of things because i think your rapping it's perfect...and your pronunciation seems good...I don't know if the mixing ameliore ur rap but i really think it's perfect ^^.. You have energy and i like it ! Later post solo cover i can critic more ^^ ! and no u don't suck !
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 29th April 2012, 15:08
Name: Shiori Song: Ugly Artist: 2NE1 Language: Japanese Your thinking about your performance: I'm very proud of my harmonies XD The pitching made me cringe OTL
Merci beaucoup pour ton temps et j'espere que ma voix n'eroche pas tes oreilles XP
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 29th April 2012, 15:29
Shiori wrote:
Name: Shiori Song: Ugly Artist: 2NE1 Language: Japanese Your thinking about your performance: I'm very proud of my harmonies XD The pitching made me cringe OTL
Merci beaucoup pour ton temps et j'espere que ma voix n'eroche pas tes oreilles XP
Hmm...First i think your force your voice...Do you sing throught your throat ? Or throught your stomach ? Because it sound a little bit low...You sound instable at the end of 0:19...At 0:30 your force very very too much :/ , it sounded like a saturation... Don't try to imit original singer ! It's a mistake that i see often...People try to imit... Adapt your natural tone to sing and try to improve ^^( I can understand that before i'm was the same haha !)...Sometimes i feel a little hesitation i'm right ? Some note look wrong at certain moment...You have not really energy and emotion :/...
I think your major problem it's your technic of singing...And your breathing ! Try to sing throught your stomach for start...Take lots of breathe with your mounth... But i think you have potential...Record yourself with instrumental ! Not with the real song because singer's tonality are different...
Et non tu n'a pas ecorché mes oreilles :)
Lena LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 444 Age : 27 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2012-04-13
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 5th May 2012, 14:40
Name : Lena Song : Twinkle Artist : Tae-Ti-Seo Language : Korean Your thinking about your performance : I think that I did well, but the high notes seemed a little bit loud.... =='
Number of posts : 1054 Age : 24 Location : Singapore ! Registration date : 2011-10-29
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 5th May 2012, 14:45
Name :Alicia Song :Doradora Artist :U-KISS Language :Korean Your thinking about your performance : I really like all the singing parts ! But I can't rap . :B . And , One part of the rap which I stopped halfway , PLEASE ignore that . ):
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 5th May 2012, 17:24
Name : Rie Song : So Cool Artist : Sistar Language : Korean Your thinking about your performance : meh,not my best cover but I really want this to be criticed :D please be as harsh as possible
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 5th May 2012, 20:26
Lena wrote:
Name : Lena Song : Twinkle Artist : Tae-Ti-Seo Language : Korean Your thinking about your performance : I think that I did well, but the high notes seemed a little bit loud.... =='
I think the start is perfect...But you force your voice at lots of moment... At 0:23/24 you try too reach hight note...But when you do it it's a little bit flat... beire ssayeo isseodo-o-o
I have noticed that you have lots of difficulty for hight at this part...It's very very hight part so it's hard...I feel something like a saturation here... neul naye kyeoseul jikyeojwo nae juwiiman maemdora nuneul tteji marajwo nae maeryeoge ppajyeo
Little bit hesitation with the pronunciation here ^^ ? nan mijiye sekye shiganeurijeobeorilkeol
achime nuneul tteobwahdo Your "o" here it's perfect !
At 1:46 your voice is instable... Try to sing throught your diaphragm ! Take lots of breath and try to keep your (coat ?) and take breath your breathe with your mounth :)
Your backround vocal are good and you have a powerfull voice ! It's a nice cover ^^
AliciaBoos wrote:
Name :Alicia Song :Doradora Artist :U-KISS Language :Korean Your thinking about your performance : I really like all the singing parts ! But I can't rap . :B . And , One part of the rap which I stopped halfway , PLEASE ignore that . ):
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First ! The mixing and the quality are not good...A bad mic can sound your voice false sometimes...But she is not... I think some low note are flat...(Like 0:27) I think you're more confurtable in hight note... (0:45~ 0:48)) Sometimes you forced your vibrato ! Don't force it ^^ (Like 1:11) Your low note here are very beautiful (1:44~1:50) I feel a little hesitation here with the lyrics right ? (1:50)
Rie wrote:
Name : Rie Song : So Cool Artist : Sistar Language : Korean Your thinking about your performance : meh,not my best cover but I really want this to be criticed :D please be as harsh as possible
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First ! Your mixing and effect are super good ! I think you sing throught your throat...(1:52)(3;01)You sing right but throught your throat.. When you sing throught your throught you missed lots of power...And your throat hurt very very fast...Try to sing throught your venter... I think you sing throught your venter at (2:00) ^^ Your voice are a little bit instable at backround vocal (3:06~3:07) I don't feel lots of energy here :s... Your rap is very good but you need a little bit more practice :D I think it's a good cover but you can probably do better with a more powerful voice ;)
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 5th May 2012, 21:15
Name : Shiori and Ramune Song : Perfect Crime (duet) Artist : VOCALOID (Luka x Len) Language : Japanese Your thinking about your performance : We did our best and I'm satisfied with the overall result :3
Alicia LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 1054 Age : 24 Location : Singapore ! Registration date : 2011-10-29
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 6th May 2012, 04:13
Yeaa . I did it one shot , I didn't mix it cause I didn't know how to :( . I really hope theres any kind souls that will teach me . T_T " . I'll take note of all of the mistakes you pointed out . ^^v . And , Whose part do you think I'm suited more for ? :B . Kamsahamnida ~
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 9th May 2012, 16:41
C'est que maintenant que je vois les nouveaux critiques
Name : Anih Song : Where'd you go Artist : Fort Minor Language : Anglais, oui :D Your thinking about your performance : Je n'en suis pas très fière, mais je trouve ça drôle. Ne fais pas attention à la vidéo (écran noir des annotations de couleur)
jiroSHExfilesTATU LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 718 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2011-11-30
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 15th May 2012, 08:16
Name : Erin not my real name, though :D Song : I Hate You Artist : 2ne1 Language : korean Your thinking about your performance : uhm, i don't know...just fine... lol...
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 16th May 2012, 11:41
Name : cloudymelody Song : Nagging Artist : IU ft. Seulong Language : Korean
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 28th May 2012, 21:49
Shiori wrote:
Name : Shiori and Ramune Song : Perfect Crime (duet) Artist : VOCALOID (Luka x Len) Language : Japanese Your thinking about your performance : We did our best and I'm satisfied with the overall result :3
I think you force too much at the end of the" izanaimashou". I don't know if i am right or not but after u sing you throat hurt right ? If it's hurt it mean that you don't use your venter to sing...I don't know if it's ur control or your throat but when you sing the note are not really stable...Don't force your voice...Sometimes i use my throat for sing when i do this mistake i read the lyrics i just talk and it help to find my real tone...Try do that ! Yeah i know when we read and sing just a little it's uglly but it help a lot ! try to do that and i'm so sorry if you don't understand what i say ^^
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 6th June 2012, 06:38
Name: cloudymelody Song: Because I'm a Girl Artist: IU Language: Korean
JasmineMarshiana LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 684 Age : 26 Location : Hong Kong Registration date : 2011-11-17
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 11th August 2012, 03:39
Name: Jasmine Song: 忘了 Artist: Rainie Yang Language: Mandarin
My thinking:.... a bit normal
Thanks :D
anniexsooyeon LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 176 Age : 26 Registration date : 2012-06-18
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 12th August 2012, 06:14
Name : Jenny Song : Umbrella Artist : Rhianna Language : English Your thinking about your performance : It didn't sound that great because I was sick but I'm pretty satisfied with the outcome. There are some stuttering and weirdly pronounced lyrics.
Thank you!
HanisBack LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 177 Age : 28 Registration date : 2012-06-13
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 14th August 2012, 00:39
Name : Hanisback Song : Obviously Artist : Olivia Ong Language : Mandarin
*I didn't do a proper recording. I just sang with the voice in the background........ Hehe
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [CLOSED (HIATUS) ] Eva's critic center ! Enter if u want to die in a slowly die :D 15th August 2012, 10:58
Please ignore my previous post about IU's because I'm a Girl and critique this instead please.
Name: cloudymelody Song: Who You Are To Me Artist: Hyorin Language: Korean
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