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My Music story :

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I'm not very good at singing but I love criticize people =) I don't really speak english so it's hard for me here =). I will do my best and write some comments for you =). «....» means I searched a word in a translator =). "....." means I don't know how to say it and I hope you understand =).

If you want a critic in French, ask me =)

I need to know :

Song :
Artist :
Link :

I will give you a note /100 and may tell you some things good or not :P


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Update (7 sept 2013)
Don't worry, be happy !

Casi / memeysuju - B1A4 - Only learned the bad things	JasmineMarshiana - TaeTiSeo - Twinkle	boadbsklover - Infinite - Can you smile

Song : Passion
Artist : Utada Hikaru
One shot : No
Percent :)

Coucou ma belle c'est encore la republique shrek :3...Pourais tu me donner ton avis sur ce cover la aussi ♥ ? Merci d'avance :p

Song : Prisoner of love
Artist : Utada hikaru
Percent
OS

Coucou Anih c'est encore moi ! Merci pour ta critique d'hier ♥...J'ten donnes du boulot décidément
Tu pourais critiqué mon cover ou j'ai été nulle a chier :3 ? S'il te plait poulette ca serais gentil ♥
Je sais que mon rythme est tout bonnement a chier en d'après les seules critiques que j'ai entendu c'est d'un chiant a entendre...La verité est que l'instrumental et 3 fois plus lent que la VO impossible de trouver le bon...Pfah...Bref j'te laisses en juger ^^

Song: Because I'm a Girl
Artist: IU
Grading system: 5
Video:

Song : この胸のときめきを Kono Mune no Tokimeki wo
Artist : 真野恵里 Manoeri
Video or mp3 :
Notation system : 5

Song : Tian Mi Mi
Artist : Teresa Teng
Video or mp3 :


Notation system : 5
One-shot or no ? : One-shot

Please critic...hehe..i would like to improve myself. Thanks.

Song : twitter
Artist : DevilishP
Video or mp3 : twitter

Notation system : 5
One-shot or no ? : Nope, but I didn't spend as much time/effort on it as I'd have liked...

Song: Twinkle
Artist : TaeTiSeo
video or mp3:
notation system: 5
one shot or no: nope :D

Song : For Your Love
Artist : Jang HyeJin
Video or mp3 : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqO7WkIDzk4&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
Notation system : 5. 100% to 0%
One-shot or no ? : no


thank you :))

AnihJourney wrote:

Rie wrote:

Song: Twinkle
Artist : TaeTiSeo
video or mp3:
notation system: 5
one shot or no: nope :D

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Thanks a lot Anih :D I'll work hard to fill in that "something" ><

AnihJourney wrote:

dnxo14 wrote:

Song : For Your Love
Artist : Jang HyeJin
Video or mp3 : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqO7WkIDzk4&feature=BFa&list=PLBA4EBD1C7B24B407
Notation system : 5. 100% to 0%
One-shot or no ? : no
thank you :))

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im really glad that you appreciate the emotions i poured on this cover .. thank you :)
kekeke .. mixing problems, kekeke .. i mean those parts sounded so different hehehe my bad~ but im happy that you still find it good :)) . .i may not perfectly say it in words but your review really made me so happy today .. (even though i am so hungry while typing this reply kekeke) and tagging me as an "artist" is the greatest compliment i ever had yet :)) thank you very much :)) .. im really happy because of your kind review :)) thank you <3 hehehehe

Song : The Wizard of Oz Musical- Over the Rainbow (Cover)
Artist : Danielle Hope
Video or mp3 :


Notation system : Percent
One-shot or no ? : One shot

Song: Heaven
Artist: Ailee
Video or mp3:


Notation system: Percent

Song: The Story Only I Didn't Know
Artist: IU


Notation system: percent

Song: Because I'm A Woman
Artist: IU
see siggy~

Song: Twinkle
Artist: TTS
LInk:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5sNdfYTB4M&lc=Ga5fvDhi9lI8VKFyaPpUSlBEyhD-zQ1E7hionR3-TLI&feature=inbox

thanks :)))

Song: Electric shock
Artist: F(x)
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W2zifa1MdY
Semi one shot ? On peux dire ca... J'ai fais la première partie en une fois et la deuxième en une fois... Sauf pour les adlibs bien sur :)

Coucou Anih c'est re moi ! Décidement en ce moment je t'harcelles mouhaha... C'est pas bien de faire travailler une mourante ^^
Donc voila si je pourais avoir ta critique la dessus... Ca fais un bail que j'me dis que j'allais faire ce cover puis au final j'ai persisté et voila le resultat... Merci Anih ♥
En espèrant que demain on fasse un ptit karaoké :D

AnihJourney wrote:

JasmineMarshiana wrote:

Song: Twinkle
Artist: TTS
LInk:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j5sNdfYTB4M&lc=Ga5fvDhi9lI8VKFyaPpUSlBEyhD-zQ1E7hionR3-TLI&feature=inbox
thanks :)))

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Thank you :)))) just. trying to be.. sexy at the YEAh xdddd

Song: Missing You Like Crazy
Artist: Taeyeon
Song:


Notation system: Percent

Song: Chain
Artist: Sayaka Oohara
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3QBab5cNpyY
Notation system: percent

Hey I saw you're offering a critic of all of one person's covers.
Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL65622F3D93AA1A5C&feature=plcp

All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.

cloudymelody wrote:

Hey I saw you're offering a critic of all of one person's covers.
Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL65622F3D93AA1A5C&feature=plcp

All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.

Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D

AnihJourney wrote:

cloudymelody wrote:

Hey I saw you're offering a critic of all of one person's covers.
Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL65622F3D93AA1A5C&feature=plcp

All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.

Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D

Oh it's okay. You're not accepting requests at the moment, are you?

cloudymelody wrote:

AnihJourney wrote:

cloudymelody wrote:

Hey I saw you're offering a critic of all of one person's covers.
Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL65622F3D93AA1A5C&feature=plcp

All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.

Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D

Oh it's okay. You're not accepting requests at the moment, are you?

Yes yes you can post :D I will change the status... I just wanted you to be the first to know :D

Ohhh okay thanks very much! In that case, can you review this?

Song : I Love You
Artist : Taeyeon
Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxE75qPnNT8&feature=g-upl
VVPC* or NC* : VVPC

cloudymelody wrote:

Ohhh okay thanks very much! In that case, can you review this?

Song : I Love You
Artist : Taeyeon
Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxE75qPnNT8&feature=g-upl
VVPC* or NC* : VVPC

Pitch 192/200 : (0:58) (1:25) (1:34)note too low for you I think (1:40)difficulty to reach the note
Emotion 200/200 : I hear emotion everywhere, everywhere, everytime :D
Quality 150/150 : Easy to listen million times because nothing really wrong.
Hearing 130/150 : Some passages are not enough louder, some are too loud : I mean too much differences. I think it's because it's not your key... 1 tone higher, maybe it would be good but I know we can't always choose :D
Awesomeness 100/100 : You're totally Awesome !! I really like your cover ;D The final word is awesome <3
Fidelity 100/100 : Easily to recognize the song :D
Originality 0/30 : Doesn't mean you haven't got originality ;D I just like special covers with something more to bring... Like harmonies, adlibs or another melody for one or more parts of the song.
Personnal cover 150/150 : We hear it's you singing and we recognize you. You seem to have not copied the original song. You took the song for you :D You sang for you :D
Language 146/150 : Some "letters" are not totally distincts.
Omg 2/10 : I can't tell "OMG" so you can do better than this ;D
Captivating 80/100 : You didn't catch me entirely ;D
Technique 180/200 : Low notes are "trembling". (1:53)seems to be little bit flat. (2:02)you can attack the note better ;D (2:28 to 2:29)not perfectly reach compared to 2:29 to 2:30 where it's perfect and 2:27 to 2:28.
Transitions 90/100 : Transitions are well done (2:39 to 2:42) we hear like it's not sang one shot here.
Microphone (I called it Microphone but it's not your microphone I'm rating :D)
9/10 : I hear you clearly, 1 saturation (2:50)
Rhythm 90/90 : All is timed with the instrumental
Breathing 60/60 : We hear your breathing and I love how we hear it ;D You can sing long notes until the end
Bonus (long cover, fitting song, ...) 2/4

Total : 1681/1800
93%
It's an awesome cover :D

NB : This is the "harsh" critique :O :D If I take my old critique, you have 99% ;D

AnihJourney wrote:

Pitch 192/200 : (0:58) (1:25) (1:34)note too low for you I think (1:40)difficulty to reach the note
Emotion 200/200 : I hear emotion everywhere, everywhere, everytime :D
Quality 150/150 : Easy to listen million times because nothing really wrong.
Hearing 130/150 : Some passages are not enough louder, some are too loud : I mean too much differences. I think it's because it's not your key... 1 tone higher, maybe it would be good but I know we can't always choose :D
Awesomeness 100/100 : You're totally Awesome !! I really like your cover ;D The final word is awesome <3
Fidelity 100/100 : Easily to recognize the song :D
Originality 0/30 : Doesn't mean you haven't got originality ;D I just like special covers with something more to bring... Like harmonies, adlibs or another melody for one or more parts of the song.
Personnal cover 150/150 : We hear it's you singing and we recognize you. You seem to have not copied the original song. You took the song for you :D You sang for you :D
Language 146/150 : Some "letters" are not totally distincts.
Omg 2/10 : I can't tell "OMG" so you can do better than this ;D
Captivating 80/100 : You didn't catch me entirely ;D
Technique 180/200 : Low notes are "trembling". (1:53)seems to be little bit flat. (2:02)you can attack the note better ;D (2:28 to 2:29)not perfectly reach compared to 2:29 to 2:30 where it's perfect and 2:27 to 2:28.
Transitions 90/100 : Transitions are well done (2:39 to 2:42) we hear like it's not sang one shot here.
Microphone (I called it Microphone but it's not your microphone I'm rating :D)
9/10 : I hear you clearly, 1 saturation (2:50)
Rhythm 90/90 : All is timed with the instrumental
Breathing 60/60 : We hear your breathing and I love how we hear it ;D You can sing long notes until the end
Bonus (long cover, fitting song, ...) 2/4

Total : 1681/1800
93%
It's an awesome cover :D

NB : This is the "harsh" critique :O :D If I take my old critique, you have 99% ;D

Wow thanks so much for the details!
Will work harder next time:) Maybe I'd get a 95% on a harsh critique next time? Ahahah wishful thinking sorry sorry. :P
Thanks again! ^^

Sorry for disturbing! But can you critique this song?

Song: Don't Say Goodbye
Artist: Davichi
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3IoVTXB_FU&feature=g-user-u
VVPC* or NPC*: VVPC

Since it's a duet, can you just critique my parts alone? I sang under my yt account name of Melodic Skies, and the person who's currently singing appears at the bottom right corner of the screen. Thanks much! (If it helps, I sang Haeri's part)

Song : INFINITIZE + The Chaser
Artist : Infinite
Link :
VVPC* or NC* : VVPC . :)

I sing as Sunggyu . :P .

cloudymelody wrote:

Sorry for disturbing! But can you critique this song?

Song: Don't Say Goodbye
Artist: Davichi
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3IoVTXB_FU&feature=g-user-u
VVPC* or NPC*: VVPC

Since it's a duet, can you just critique my parts alone? I sang under my yt account name of Melodic Skies, and the person who's currently singing appears at the bottom right corner of the screen. Thanks much! (If it helps, I sang Haeri's part)

Pitch 77/100 : (2:23) sounds false, (0:54), (2:28 to
2:32) sounds not perfect but not completely false. The adlibs x2 are
good for breathing and technique but "finish" sounding false. (3:20)
little false. Less than + or - 1/2 tone ;D
Emotion 100/100 : Completely amazing <3
Hearing 60/75
: We don't really hear you for low notes at the beggining + (0:45). (0:49) : losing too muchpowerful. (1:51) (1:55)
Awesomeness 50/50 : I am jealous of your talent ;D
Fidelity 50/50 : We recognize easily the song
Language 73/75
: not the same than the lyrics you put on the descrption box. I didn't
count it because I don't know if it's «deliberated». So i found some
passages in your last solo.
Omg 2/5 : It's impressive.
Captivating 50/50 : completely IN :D
Technique 98/100
: good vibrato, long notes(1:02, 1:07, 1:15) are very good !!!, (1:14)
little problem ;D (2:17) «glide» not perfect (3:09) seems you have
difficulties to reach the note,
Rhythm 45/45
Breathing 28/30 : (2:27) seems you are lacking of breath
Bonus 1/2 : this song suits you very well.

Total : 634/680
93%
First listening I thought you will have a better mark. After criticizing I thought you will have a worse mark. Finaly it's the same mark than your other cover ;D
It's a really beautiful duet !!