[OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=)
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@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 5th March 2012, 09:26
hi im casi and as we all know we should all help each others cover on giving them feedbacks. well, i'm here to criticize all of you're wonderful covers and collabs =) whatever that is. it may be a ballad, a capella, rapping, dance whatsoever., name your genre!
i am not a very good singer but i'm pretty sure that i have the tone to sing. i have perfect ears too for those members who wants full critic!
i too always post my covers here and on every other threads of critic sections and i know how you feel when you get some feedbacks right?!
i will reply here to your post,rate and comment on your video on yt. that's cool right? hehehe...
just post the link of your song cover and i will definitely gonna dig it!
rating up to 100% =)
thank you^^
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 7th March 2012, 06:10
thank you for letting me criticize your cover. first, the instrumental. clean inst or shud i say no vocals were perfect for a cover but since there is a male part it's okay. the voice, very cute^^ you sang this song in falsetto right? not your normal voice? but your voice suits the song although i haven't heard this song before hehehe... the mixing, love the auto tuned part and the reverbs.. you can dubbed this song correctly. and i love that. as for the whole song i give you 97% =)
for T-ara cry cry
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oohh i love t-ara's cry cry.. your singing was a bit struggled..the harmonies didn't help that much because some aren't on tune. sorry about that. do you have colds? that affects a lot on your singing. you should relax first your voice and warm up before u sing a full song^^ the adlibs were ok. i give you a rating of 85%
Edit : Criticize all elements you want to criticize =)
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hi! first customer kekeke =) ooohh! a chinese cover although i really don't listen that much to a chinese song this was a good song.
ok now the time has come! first the instrumental is okay..clean no vocals! the microphone is not that good seems like you are locked on a bathroom and you start to sing and record. or is it just the mixing? anyways. your voice is cute too^^ your singing, hhmmm.. you somehow late on some parts. the pronunciation i have no idea about that LOL XD the harmonies, there are no harmonies! harmonies makes the song beautiful you should put some in the future. it's like you just sing on a normal mood. not much emotions. thank you!! all in all i give you 90%
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 8th March 2012, 11:42
at first wow! a live cover! *engk* you just dubbed it the finished cover am i right? kekekek..but it was cool..i was thinking of that way too^^ u just did it first! XD
the song was nice a 2ne1 song is kinda hard to sing. you somehow been late at the beginning of your singing. and also don't put the mic closer to your mouth when you sing. it sounded full of air. lastly the overlapping of the song, you kinda struggled between lines. practice more or should i say don't sing it in one-shot thingy, try to pause a bit and then continue recording^^ that makes a better product^^ this is just my opinion don't take it too seriously! i'm not that pro! =) rating : 91 %
btw i love the tone of your voice!!!
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 8th March 2012, 14:12
at first wow! a live cover! *engk* you just dubbed it the finished cover am i right? kekekek..but it was cool..i was thinking of that way too^^ u just did it first! XD
the song was nice a 2ne1 song is kinda hard to sing. you somehow been late at the beginning of your singing. and also don't put the mic closer to your mouth when you sing. it sounded full of air. lastly the overlapping of the song, you kinda struggled between lines. practice more or should i say don't sing it in one-shot thingy, try to pause a bit and then continue recording^^ that makes a better product^^ this is just my opinion don't take it too seriously! i'm not that pro! =) rating : 91 %
btw i love the tone of your voice!!!
Thanks cassie ^__^ ♥ But you know it's not a one shot T__T I was record it lots of time and select what part are good and not è___é ! I just playback ^___^
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 8th March 2012, 14:17
oohhh sorry about that i thought it was a one-shot cover! my bad XD
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 11th March 2012, 05:00
harsh?! what the heck are you talking about? you are great! the harmonies and the melody was all precise! one thing is missing. the adlibs! you didn't included it.. but anyways you were great..one of the best "the boys cover" ive ever heard so far.. the collaboration hope you make the full version of this.. i'll be more harsh if you included the bridge part wherein taeyeon and jessica's part combined the highest note..u know what i mean. rating : 99% lol..because this was not a full version XD
yo yo yo!! miss A! i also tried to sing this one! but Jia's rap was just aww,,, but now i can sing it perfectly lol XXDD
ayy girl! are you in a rush? you were out of breath. do some overlapping, dubbing and some harmonies.. they make the song very nice^^ don't record in one shot. and the rap part was awkward XXD and the volume of the instrumental was a bit low. i give you 90% thank you!
okay let alone the guitar! since i don't know how to play it XD the tune was okay the singing was okay..the pronunciation needs some more practice.. i don't know what to say. sorry.. you did great! thanks for sharing your live cover^^ as for the guitar playing your singing i give you 90%
jiroSHExfilesTATU LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 718 Age : 31 Location : Philippines Registration date : 2011-11-30
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 12th March 2012, 08:50
harsh?! what the heck are you talking about? you are great! the harmonies and the melody was all precise! one thing is missing. the adlibs! you didn't included it.. but anyways you were great..one of the best "the boys cover" ive ever heard so far.. the collaboration hope you make the full version of this.. i'll be more harsh if you included the bridge part wherein taeyeon and jessica's part combined the highest note..u know what i mean. rating : 99% lol..because this was not a full version XD
Ui, gagawa na 'yan ng full cover...Kekeke. Demanding?
yo yo yo!! miss A! i also tried to sing this one! but Jia's rap was just aww,,, but now i can sing it perfectly lol XXDD
ayy girl! are you in a rush? you were out of breath. do some overlapping, dubbing and some harmonies.. they make the song very nice^^ don't record in one shot. and the rap part was awkward XXD and the volume of the instrumental was a bit low. i give you 90% thank you!
Yeah, I guess my rap part, in some lines, are too fast. I believe you can sing this perfectly.... ;) I like to do a full cover of this and other songs like The Grasshopper Song, The boys, Run Devil run but busy busyhan ang lola mo. lol. thanks for the review!
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 12th March 2012, 10:21
harsh?! what the heck are you talking about? you are great! the harmonies and the melody was all precise! one thing is missing. the adlibs! you didn't included it.. but anyways you were great..one of the best "the boys cover" ive ever heard so far.. the collaboration hope you make the full version of this.. i'll be more harsh if you included the bridge part wherein taeyeon and jessica's part combined the highest note..u know what i mean. rating : 99% lol..because this was not a full version XD
Ui, gagawa na 'yan ng full cover...Kekeke. Demanding?
yo yo yo!! miss A! i also tried to sing this one! but Jia's rap was just aww,,, but now i can sing it perfectly lol XXDD
ayy girl! are you in a rush? you were out of breath. do some overlapping, dubbing and some harmonies.. they make the song very nice^^ don't record in one shot. and the rap part was awkward XXD and the volume of the instrumental was a bit low. i give you 90% thank you!
Yeah, I guess my rap part, in some lines, are too fast. I believe you can sing this perfectly.... ;) I like to do a full cover of this and other songs like The Grasshopper Song, The boys, Run Devil run but busy busyhan ang lola mo. lol. thanks for the review!
LOL...pinoy din ba si boadbsklover??
i'd love to hear your other covers in the future!! im kinda busy too ...heheheh
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 12th March 2012, 20:56
Hey =) Thanks for your critic. Can you criticize this one too please ? Song : I won't back down Artist : Tom Petty Link : www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAx3OxXlOlw Comments : I wanted to cover it in the style of Tyler Hilton.
thanks <3
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 13th March 2012, 01:08
harsh?! what the heck are you talking about? you are great! the harmonies and the melody was all precise! one thing is missing. the adlibs! you didn't included it.. but anyways you were great..one of the best "the boys cover" ive ever heard so far.. the collaboration hope you make the full version of this.. i'll be more harsh if you included the bridge part wherein taeyeon and jessica's part combined the highest note..u know what i mean. rating : 99% lol..because this was not a full version XD
thanks :) I was planning on doing a full cover but I can't record the missing parts at the moment though X_X lol yeah, they're pretty hard XDD thanks! xD (I might go back here when I finally finish making the full version lol)
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 13th March 2012, 01:09
[quote="@Casi"][quote="jiroSHExfilesTATU"]
@Casi wrote:
LOL...pinoy din ba si boadbsklover??
lol, oo pinoy din ako :D :))
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 13th March 2012, 14:22
LOL...pinoy ka din pala!! tsk!! hello!!!
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 13th March 2012, 15:13
AnihJourney wrote:
Hey =) Thanks for your critic. Can you criticize this one too please ? Song : I won't back down Artist : Tom Petty Link : www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAx3OxXlOlw Comments : I wanted to cover it in the style of Tyler Hilton.
thanks <3
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hhhmm never heard the song before,, again let alone the guitar XD acoustics...lovely.. your voice suits the strums of the guitar,, i really envy you! u can play guitar ...=) the pronunciation is good.. the highs and lows were perfect.. i give you a rating of 95%
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 13th March 2012, 16:19
2 links but only 1 is working. why did you deleted the other one?
be my baby~ the mixing is okay,, no delayed vocals..hehehe.. vocals is nice..very cute^^ but somehow you're catching your breathe. the rapping was awkward. you can't pronounce the words clearly. you better practice more on the rapping part if you wanted to put raps on your covers. the melody is alright. no harmonies, it's okay^^ rating : 90%
heartbreaker!! i also did a cover of this!! my first auto-tuned! yey!!
well well well,,, the mixing is AWESOME! the overlapping parts were great! the harmonies are daebak! one thing is not right. the pronunciation of the words.. remember this is a fast song and words should be clearly heard. anyways you did a great job here!! rating: 98%
as i said from the above post. the mixing is great! same with the others.. your voice seems suited with this song.. and pointing it again..your pronunciation! =) rate: 95%
practice more with the wordings!
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 22nd March 2012, 08:16
Could you specify at some places? ^^ So I know what things to improve
PiggyMelody Retired
Number of posts : 1116 Age : 24 Location : California Registration date : 2011-01-06
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 03:17
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 04:09
Hey there, please critique my cover of 2NE1's "Ugly", which can be found in my signature XP
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 08:01
*never heard this song before and i can't read the title..LOL*
0:50 - fast part,,not so good.. XD both of your voices suits together. sorry i can't critic the pronunciation coz' i can't read and i suck at mandarin XD the melody and harmony is good. there are some parts wherein either of you have flats..cute voice^^ rate: 88% (im on LSS at the chorus LOL)
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 08:07
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 08:09
shioЯi wrote:
Hey there, please critique my cover of 2NE1's "Ugly", which can be found in my signature XP
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hi thank you for letting me judge ur cover^^
the timing some were late.. i think you were trying to sound like 2ne1 and the result is not that good. i think it would be better if you sang in your own voice. the pronunciation hhhmmm okay..harmony is good. try to practice the breathing..you were catching your breath. =) and use dubbing and overlapping when recording. it makes the song more better. rate: 85%
@Casi LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 123 Age : 32 Location : city hunter Registration date : 2011-10-18
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 15th May 2012, 08:38
your voice is cute. the pronunciation is good too..the timing is okay..there are some parts also wherein you have flats. the mixing is okay,. keep it up^^ rate: 90%
thank you^^
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 2nd June 2012, 14:25
Hi cassie ! Can you critic my cover ? Please be harsh ^__^ !
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 6th June 2012, 06:37
Critic my cover? I'm aware that I'm off-beat at some parts. :(
Shiori Rainbow
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Subject: Re: [OPEN] WANT TO BE CRITICIZED? ENTER AT UR OWN RISK!=) 9th June 2012, 20:50
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