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Yaku LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 180 Age : 34 Location : France ~ Registration date : 2012-05-01
| Subject: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 26th July 2012, 08:17 | |
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Last edited by Yayou on 26th July 2012, 22:47; edited 1 time in total |
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LaurenLCD Rainbow
Number of posts : 2415 Age : 33 Location : Behind you being a sneaky chibi ninja Registration date : 2011-12-12
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 26th July 2012, 17:51 | |
| Youtube says the video isn't available. >.< |
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Yaku LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 180 Age : 34 Location : France ~ Registration date : 2012-05-01
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 26th July 2012, 22:19 | |
| Okay, in 5 minutes it's going to be ready ! |
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LaurenLCD Rainbow
Number of posts : 2415 Age : 33 Location : Behind you being a sneaky chibi ninja Registration date : 2011-12-12
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 26th July 2012, 23:16 | |
| Now it's blocked for my country i'll have to settle for the box'd audio -_- |
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Yaku LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 180 Age : 34 Location : France ~ Registration date : 2012-05-01
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 27th July 2012, 02:01 | |
| My first one of GBBB is blocked by mBC and now this one by KBS -_- |
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LaurenLCD Rainbow
Number of posts : 2415 Age : 33 Location : Behind you being a sneaky chibi ninja Registration date : 2011-12-12
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 27th July 2012, 02:33 | |
| *sigh* Maybe you should just stick to using album cover stills, neh? |
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Yaku LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 180 Age : 34 Location : France ~ Registration date : 2012-05-01
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 27th July 2012, 09:50 | |
| yeah i think i'll do that. |
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phannie. Rainbow
Number of posts : 1589 Age : 32 Location : infinite's dorm Registration date : 2011-05-07
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 27th July 2012, 12:32 | |
| Comments (hope no one get offended or mad)
Yayou: the rap need a more energy and swag. But you did flow nicely together. Hara: I still think you sound like a little kid :) but overall your parts were nicely done. Ginger: you were missing some energy as it sounded blah and dead to me. And I'm not sure if it's the mic but you makes you sound "soft" or rather pretty quiet. Lauren: watch out for the tone in here. Pitch was good tho. And try "singing" the parts as it sounded more like you were just saying it instead. Lillie: did you do the intro part? If so I didnt know your voice was kinda low..something new I learn. But your part was also nicely done. Rie: you too. Nicely done on you part as I can't find anything else to say except good job.
Mixing: I'm not sure if it was planned or not but I only hear two voices for each chorus part..may I ask why so? I think if you were to mix everyone together it would sound more fuller. But while at the chorus the voices were a bit off timing with each other. No worries tho. More practice and you will nail it down. :)
Okay I think that's all I can say..again hope no one gets mad as I'm just criticing to help improve.
And video is block for me :(
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Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 29 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 27th July 2012, 21:44 | |
| - phannie. wrote:
- Comments (hope no one get offended or mad)
Yayou: the rap need a more energy and swag. But you did flow nicely together. Hara: I still think you sound like a little kid :) but overall your parts were nicely done. Ginger: you were missing some energy as it sounded blah and dead to me. And I'm not sure if it's the mic but you makes you sound "soft" or rather pretty quiet. Lauren: watch out for the tone in here. Pitch was good tho. And try "singing" the parts as it sounded more like you were just saying it instead. Lillie: did you do the intro part? If so I didnt know your voice was kinda low..something new I learn. But your part was also nicely done. Rie: you too. Nicely done on you part as I can't find anything else to say except good job.
Mixing: I'm not sure if it was planned or not but I only hear two voices for each chorus part..may I ask why so? I think if you were to mix everyone together it would sound more fuller. But while at the chorus the voices were a bit off timing with each other. No worries tho. More practice and you will nail it down. :)
Okay I think that's all I can say..again hope no one gets mad as I'm just criticing to help improve.
And video is block for me :(
Thank you for the comments :) |
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Yaku LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 180 Age : 34 Location : France ~ Registration date : 2012-05-01
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 29th July 2012, 08:55 | |
| - phannie. wrote:
- Comments (hope no one get offended or mad)
Yayou: the rap need a more energy and swag. But you did flow nicely together. Hara: I still think you sound like a little kid :) but overall your parts were nicely done. Ginger: you were missing some energy as it sounded blah and dead to me. And I'm not sure if it's the mic but you makes you sound "soft" or rather pretty quiet. Lauren: watch out for the tone in here. Pitch was good tho. And try "singing" the parts as it sounded more like you were just saying it instead. Lillie: did you do the intro part? If so I didnt know your voice was kinda low..something new I learn. But your part was also nicely done. Rie: you too. Nicely done on you part as I can't find anything else to say except good job.
Mixing: I'm not sure if it was planned or not but I only hear two voices for each chorus part..may I ask why so? I think if you were to mix everyone together it would sound more fuller. But while at the chorus the voices were a bit off timing with each other. No worries tho. More practice and you will nail it down. :)
Okay I think that's all I can say..again hope no one gets mad as I'm just criticing to help improve.
And video is block for me :(
If i made everyone together in chorus it would be noisy, i tried to do pair each chorus with two voices that suit together, and fair as two different people for each chorus. |
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xxlillie LTS Admin
Number of posts : 6708 Age : 31 Location : Aus Registration date : 2011-05-07
| Subject: Re: Group 2 ~ Dalshabet - Hit U 4th August 2012, 05:44 | |
| - phannie. wrote:
- Lillie: did you do the intro part? If so I didnt know your voice was kinda low..something new I learn. But your part was also nicely done.
Yup, intro and the spoken parts - Low manly voice. Thanks :) |
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