Hyuriko
LTS Raindrop
 Number of posts : 419
Age : 31
Location : France , Montbéliard
Registration date : 2011-04-17
 |  Subject: Aya hirano - God knows  4th September 2011, 13:11 | |
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Stellaniou
LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 398
Age : 31
Location : Indonesia
Registration date : 2011-03-27
| | Subject: Re: Aya hirano - God knows 5th September 2011, 08:37 | |
| Finally ! My first-finished-collab in here  Great great everyone did a great job ^^ i like it :DD |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Aya hirano - God knows 6th September 2011, 23:35 | |
| Sounds great *-*
Good job! Amazing! <3 |
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xxlillie
LTS Admin
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Age : 30
Location : Aus
Registration date : 2011-05-07
| | Subject: Re: Aya hirano - God knows 10th September 2011, 10:52 | |
| Please use [LTSEnt collab] to label your videos
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Hyuriko
LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419
Age : 31
Location : France , Montbéliard
Registration date : 2011-04-17
| | Subject: Re: Aya hirano - God knows 21st September 2011, 13:44 | |
| Here is the critic of collab ^_^ - Underwoodrockz wrote:
- i just try to differentiate between the voice differences and lyrics only to avoid to be bias...
Kawaita kokoro de kakenukeru
Gomen ne nani mo dekinakute
this is so nice. nice voice.
Itami wo wakachiau koto sae
Anata wa yurushite kurenai
a bit flat when u started at Itami.... then its started to be a bit sharp...
Muku ni ikiru tame ni furimukazu
Senaka mukete satteshimau
On the lonely rail
this is also a mixing of sharp n flat here n there...
Watashi tsuiteiku yo
Donna tsurai sekai no yami no naka de sae
Kitto anata wa kagayaite
this is ok but sounds a bit flat at 'no yami no naka'
Koeru mirai no hate
Yowasa yue ni tamashii kowasarenu you ni
My way kasanaru yo
Ima futari ni God bless...
this part is totally out of tunes. the harmonization at 'ima futari....' is so BAD!
Todokete atsuku naru omoi wa
Genjitsu tokashite samayou
nice
Aitai kimochi ni riyuu wa nai
Anata e afuredasu Lovin' you
BAD.. same mistakes. out of tunes..
Semete utsukushii yume dake wo
Egakinagara oikakeyou
For your lonely heart
quite ok la.. a bit flat at 'utsukushii....'
Yamete uso wa anata rashikunai yo
Me wo mite kore kara no koto wo hanasou
Watashi kakugo shiteru
quite ok. a bit flat at 'kore kara..'
Kurai mirai datte
Tsuyoku natte unmei kaerareru kamo ne
My wish kanaetai noni
Subete wa God knows...
same mistakes dear. off-pitch!!!!! AGAIN!!!!! the ok part is only at Subete wa God knows...(bcoz it contains other girls voices)
Anata ga ite watashi ga ite
Hoka no hito wa kieteshimatta
so-so, quite flat here n there.
Awai yume no utsukushisa wo egakinagara
Kizuato nazoru
u didnt reach the high note well... consider ok la...
Dakara watashi tsuiteiku yo
Donna tsurai sekai no yami no naka de sae
Kitto anata wa kagayaite
OFF PITCH ALL THE WAY HERE!!!!!
Koeru mirai no hate
Yowasa yue ni tamashii kowasarenu you ni
My way kasanaru yo
Ima futari ni God bless...
this part also a bit flat here n there but it is WORST at 'Ima futari ni God bless...' part...
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overall comment :
1. this song is amazing! 1st time heard, already like it. haha..
2. there is one voice with a bad recording quality yet, she is the worst here.
3. after i looked at the video, hyuriko, sometimes, u r good n sometimes u r totally out of pitch. i wonder y...
4. the other girls, dowan to comment more as they didnt asked bout it.
5. to hyuriko : u hv quite a good tone, the last part is 1 key higher than previous chorus, so, u should sing 1 key higher also. other than that, u dont hv much prob..
2.5/5
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