hey guys!!!! here's le weirdo!!! hehe... i wanna be a critic because Han said i should.. haha. but i want to do it anyways... soooo.... umm.. yeahh.. oh yeah, and if you've seen Mei Le Jia You/Love Keeps Going, you know who i am...

Languages:
-Korean
-Mandarin
-Japanese
-English

Rules:
1. post the section of the lyrics, or the whole song, you are singing
2. file or youtube submitted is fine
3. it needs to be more than one minute of singing
4. submit as many songs as you want, but only after i already criticized your first one(s)

I Am Looking For (40 total points):
1. pitch-------> _/10 pts
2. fluency in language------> _/10 pts
3. emotions/feelings------> _/10 pts
4. breath holds---------> _/5 pts
5. keep up with song/be on time/keep with the beat-------> _/5 pts
6. how your voice blends with the song-------> pts

*DON'T BE SCARED TO DO THIS, BUT BE AWARE I AM VERY STRICT AND STRAIGHT FORWARD
*DON'T BE SAD IF I HURT YOUR FEELINGS, THIS IS A CRITIC CENTER
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!! x)

JKING!! haha , i love mike he's role in 美乐加油!

Please critique ~
Cover : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g5lClHEWKCw
Lyrics :

Spoiler:

PiggyMelody wrote:

JKING!! haha , i love mike he's role in 美乐加油!

Please critique ~
Cover : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g5lClHEWKCw
Lyrics :

Spoiler:

你能幸福 can't really hit high note here
突然那幾秒 can't really hit low note here
雖然那前方模糊 breath hold not long enough
可是想法清清楚楚 voice is fading away
a tiny bit late on the chorus
not enough emotions in the first half
(nice arizona.. i like tht one too)
對你的期待 can't hit low note
voice doesn't sound confident
我都想要收藏起來 make your voice smoothly go up and down
不害怕寂寞 can't hit low notes
已經快忘了 lack of emotions, can't hit the notes
voice is dying and getting quieter and more unconfident as the song gets higher
你能幸福 i can here the transition, but you need to get stronger here
low and high notes are not properly hit in the chorus
the 'oh' and 'yeah' s do not sound strong as they should, it is also very flat when you sing that last 'oh'
the high chorus is not hit well and like i said earlier, gets quieter
your voice sounds like you didn't hydrate well enough
can't hit majority of the high notes
that last 'xing fu' should be soft

Overall:
the high notes, you cannot hit because you are not letting yourself out. The low notes you cannot hit. Your voice keeps dying as the song gets higher or stronger. You have no confidence in your voice and the song. You lack a lot of emotions. Your transitions are not wonderful, but it's not awful. You have an okay voice in these types of songs. let yourself out next time, and don't try too many of these songs. try stronger songs to really see another side of yourself. don't be afraid that whoever walks in on you will laugh, you have guts to do this, ookay?

Points: 26/40 points
pitch~ 3/10 pts
fluency in language~ 10/10 pts
emotions/feelings~ 5/10 pts
breath holds~ 4/5 pts
keep up with the song/be on time/keep with the beat~ 4/5 pts

Critique our new LTSEnt Infinite permanent group ? <3
Maybe individually if you can . :P

Lyrics:
It's colorcoded on the video itself but I'll just give you the link too in case. LOL >O<

Infinitize (Intro)
The Chaser


Video :

Could you criticize my last cover please ?

Cover : https://youtu.be/RA60XY5H2NM

Lyrics :

Spoiler:

Alicia wrote:

Critique our new LTSEnt Infinite permanent group ? <3
Maybe individually if you can . :P

Lyrics:
It's colorcoded on the video itself but I'll just give you the link too in case. LOL >O<

Infinitize (Intro)
The Chaser


Video :

pitch is bad because its too low. and my stupid internet killed my post and didn't save it so i am a little too angry so i'll just give a quick overview.. the whole group got 23/40 points mainly because the pitch was off... and the emotions were not there... but sorry girls... i am not in the best mood to redo everything... if you want to know your personal points.. then PM me... thank you very much!!!

Liza wrote:

Could you criticize my last cover please ?

Cover : https://youtu.be/RA60XY5H2NM

Lyrics :

Spoiler:

you sing quite too soft... and you don't sound like.. i don't know how to explain it.. you don't sound cocky.. or.. ugh i can't find the word... but do you at least have an idea? like.. yeah... whatsoever.. the chorus sounds like you have a hard time singing.. since your voice starts disappearing once the chorus comes around.. sing louder... let yourself out but don't stretch out your voice to the point where you're cracking...

Points: 28/40 points
pitch~7/10 pts
fluency in language~9/10 pts(might be because you sing too soft)
emotions/feelings~2/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

FaShuRuma wrote:

Alicia wrote:

Critique our new LTSEnt Infinite permanent group ? <3
Maybe individually if you can . :P

Lyrics:
It's colorcoded on the video itself but I'll just give you the link too in case. LOL >O<

Infinitize (Intro)
The Chaser


Video :

pitch is bad because its too low. and my stupid internet killed my post and didn't save it so i am a little too angry so i'll just give a quick overview.. the whole group got 23/40 points mainly because the pitch was off... and the emotions were not there... but sorry girls... i am not in the best mood to redo everything... if you want to know your personal points.. then PM me... thank you very much!!!

Thanks :D
The pitch is the original pitch though . O_O .
Lol , Kekekke . Relax. It's not good to be angry . ^^

Can I have my personal points ? :D

Hello !
Can you critique this please ? BAP MASHUP :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

Lyrics

Spoiler:

AnihJourney wrote:

Hello !
Can you critique this please ? BAP MASHUP :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

Lyrics

Spoiler:

hey were there two other people singing with you? or did you sing it yourself? but anywho.. there are some low parts that you didn't hit too well, but then it was good though.. very well done.. i like all the backup and such.. but there was this one part where it sounded slightly late.. there was attitude, but not much, but more than people normally have.. i think the fluency was almost perfect... the emotions is pretty much the attitude... but great job..

Points: 36/40 points
pitch~10/10 pts
fluency in language~9/10 pts
emotions/feelings~7/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

Alicia wrote:

FaShuRuma wrote:

Alicia wrote:

Critique our new LTSEnt Infinite permanent group ? <3
Maybe individually if you can . :P

Lyrics:
It's colorcoded on the video itself but I'll just give you the link too in case. LOL >O<

Infinitize (Intro)
The Chaser


Video :

pitch is bad because its too low. and my stupid internet killed my post and didn't save it so i am a little too angry so i'll just give a quick overview.. the whole group got 23/40 points mainly because the pitch was off... and the emotions were not there... but sorry girls... i am not in the best mood to redo everything... if you want to know your personal points.. then PM me... thank you very much!!!

Thanks :D
The pitch is the original pitch though . O_O .
Lol , Kekekke . Relax. It's not good to be angry . ^^

Can I have my personal points ? :D

mmhmm!!!

Points: 26/40 points
pitch~5/10 pts
fluency in language~10/10 pts
emotions/feelings~2/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~4/5

FaShuRuma wrote:

AnihJourney wrote:

Hello !
Can you critique this please ? BAP MASHUP :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

Lyrics

Spoiler:

hey were there two other people singing with you? or did you sing it yourself? but anywho.. there are some low parts that you didn't hit too well, but then it was good though.. very well done.. i like all the backup and such.. but there was this one part where it sounded slightly late.. there was attitude, but not much, but more than people normally have.. i think the fluency was almost perfect... the emotions is pretty much the attitude... but great job..

Points: 36/40 points
pitch~10/10 pts
fluency in language~9/10 pts
emotions/feelings~7/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

WAH ! :D Only me singing ;D I think I know what part is late. I am actually working on low notes ;D
Thanks for the review :D

Hi! Can you critique this please?

Davichi's Don't Say Goodbye: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3IoVTXB_FU&feature=g-upl
Lyrics (Haeri's part): http://kpoplyricscc.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/davichi-dont-say-goodbye/

Thanks!

cloudymelody wrote:

Hi! Can you critique this please?

Davichi's Don't Say Goodbye: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3IoVTXB_FU&feature=g-upl
Lyrics (Haeri's part): http://kpoplyricscc.wordpress.com/2011/09/07/davichi-dont-say-goodbye/

Thanks!

there were a lot of high pitches that you couldn't hit.. there was not too much emotions.. there was little emotions... honestly speaking, both of you did not do so well in any of the feelings.. your pronunciation was off, but not horribly off like others... you sounded like you died in the last lines..

Points: 24/40 points
pitch~5/10 pts
fluency in language~5/10 pts
emotions/feelings~5/10 pts
breath holds~4/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

AnihJourney wrote:

FaShuRuma wrote:

AnihJourney wrote:

Hello !
Can you critique this please ? BAP MASHUP :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D7Rszj6AeYg

Lyrics

Spoiler:

hey were there two other people singing with you? or did you sing it yourself? but anywho.. there are some low parts that you didn't hit too well, but then it was good though.. very well done.. i like all the backup and such.. but there was this one part where it sounded slightly late.. there was attitude, but not much, but more than people normally have.. i think the fluency was almost perfect... the emotions is pretty much the attitude... but great job..

Points: 36/40 points
pitch~10/10 pts
fluency in language~9/10 pts
emotions/feelings~7/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

WAH ! :D Only me singing ;D I think I know what part is late. I am actually working on low notes ;D
Thanks for the review :D

wow.... only you sang all those parts... that's awesome... x) great job again... try again with another song and try to get full 40...

Trying with - Venus - Shinhwa ;D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPGrAyBq0b8
Lyrics : http://kpoplyricscc.wordpress.com/2012/04/06/shinhwa-venus/
The instrumental used is with 4PLUS1 (a very awesome group)

Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxE75qPnNT8&feature=g-upl
Lyrics: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/t/tae_yeon/i_love_you.html

Btw, thanks for the previous review! Will try my best to improve myself. :)

AnihJourney wrote:

Trying with - Venus - Shinhwa ;D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPGrAyBq0b8
Lyrics : http://kpoplyricscc.wordpress.com/2012/04/06/shinhwa-venus/
The instrumental used is with 4PLUS1 (a very awesome group)

that was okay because some parts of the song are too low for a girl to hit. The pronunciation wasn't all that great, even though in your last one it was very mmuch better. the rap sounded off a bit. i heard no sort of emotions.

Points: 21/40 points
pitch~7/10 pts
fluency in language~5/10 pts
emotions/feelings~0/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~4/5 pts

cloudymelody wrote:

Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxE75qPnNT8&feature=g-upl
Lyrics: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/t/tae_yeon/i_love_you.html

Btw, thanks for the previous review! Will try my best to improve myself. :)

i like your vibrato. but the chorus pitch was a bit too high and some of the verse was too low. there was emotions in the chorus more than there was in the verse. pronunciation was okay. you were slightly off beat for a time, and then you came back.

Points: 25/40 points
pitch~3/10 pts
fluency in language~7/10 pts
emotions/feelings~5/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

This is Won'T back down - Tyler Hilton live cover : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAx3OxXlOlw
For the lyrics, I think I used : http://tabs.ultimate-guitar.com/t/tom_petty/i_wont_back_down_ver3_crd.htm

Thanks for the precedent review :D

AnihJourney wrote:

This is Won'T back down - Tyler Hilton live cover : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAx3OxXlOlw
For the lyrics, I think I used : http://tabs.ultimate-guitar.com/t/tom_petty/i_wont_back_down_ver3_crd.htm

Thanks for the precedent review :D

i like the guitar. very well done. some of the last word pitches were a little low for you, but that's acceptable... the Heeeeeeeey part sounded a little high for you. you sounded unsure of your feelings, like you weren't sure if you wanted it, whatever 'it' is/was... the fluency was okay... majority of it was good, but just every other word or so was off... i think there were some times where your guitar was rushed, and your voice was a bit late, unless it was the other way around...

Points: 29/40 points
pitch~7/10 pts
fluency in language~7/10 pts
emotions/feelings~5/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~5/5 pts

Song : 我可以很勇敢 - Amber Ann


Lyrics : on video screen

TY^^

Hellow ^__^
Can you critic my last cover please :3 ?
( My rap is medium i know é__è )

T-ara day by day : http://colorcodedkpop.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/t-ara-day-by-day-color-coded-lyrics/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8cJgzmhYTQ

PiggyMelody wrote:

Song : 我可以很勇敢 - Amber Ann


Lyrics : on video screen

TY^^

okay ummmm... not to be mean or anything.. but i really couldn't get past the first few words... but i ended up listening to the whole cover... the pitch sounds way too low for you... that hoooo~ in the beginning was not good... pronunciation was off.. you can't really hit the high notes... there is no sort of emotions at all... main thing... you are not letting yourself out enough.... you sounded a bit off beat...

Points: 17/40 Points
pitch~3/10 pts
fluency in language~5/10 pts
emotions/feelings~0/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~4/5 pts

Hyuriko wrote:

Hellow ^__^
Can you critic my last cover please :3 ?
( My rap is medium i know é__è )

T-ara day by day : http://colorcodedkpop.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/t-ara-day-by-day-color-coded-lyrics/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8cJgzmhYTQ

i like your energy and emotions in this song... its just the pronunciation and a little bit off on the rap it sounds like.. but overall it was good... don't worry about the people who said you were awful.. i bet they can't even sing themselves... i like this cover...

Points: 35/40 points
pitch~8/10 pts
fluency in language~8/10 pts
emotions/feelings~10/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~4/5 pts

FaShuRuma wrote:

Hyuriko wrote:

Hellow ^__^
Can you critic my last cover please :3 ?
( My rap is medium i know é__è )

T-ara day by day : http://colorcodedkpop.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/t-ara-day-by-day-color-coded-lyrics/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8cJgzmhYTQ

i like your energy and emotions in this song... its just the pronunciation and a little bit off on the rap it sounds like.. but overall it was good... don't worry about the people who said you were awful.. i bet they can't even sing themselves... i like this cover...

Points: 35/40 points
pitch~8/10 pts
fluency in language~8/10 pts
emotions/feelings~10/10 pts
breath holds~5/5 pts
keep up with music/be on time/keep up with the beat~4/5 pts

Thankyu so much... ^__^
Yeah i know that my rap is not super good but i would like to become better !
When i had see the bad comment i was something like "Maybe i suck really ?" I'm think that it isn't that bad :)
Thanks again <3