Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: [OPEN] Anih's office 1st January 2012, 22:13
First topic message reminder :
NEW SYSTEM OF NOTATION
My Music story :
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6 years old, I was lazy, I had to stop my piano lessons after 3 or 4 years because I was bad at it lol... 15 years old, Piano again, just 1 year. I think playing what I want, when I want, and how I want, it's better. lol. 16 years old, Violin but studies are priority so, just 1 year. The same year, I started learning guitar by myself. New Music story : 20 years old, Ukulele for my birthday ! yeah ! =) I started covering songs in Youtube in 2009, you can check my youtube videos =) But I don't really like them... I love Gavin DeGraw and Yuna Ito, and I listen JJ Lin everyday =)).
I'm not very good at singing but I love criticize people =) I don't really speak english so it's hard for me here =). I will do my best and write some comments for you =). «....» means I searched a word in a translator =). "....." means I don't know how to say it and I hope you understand =).
If you want a critic in French, ask me =)
I need to know :
Song : Artist : Link :
I will give you a note /100 and may tell you some things good or not :P
Number of Maximum clip submitted to criticize : 1/post/second =)
SONG CHALLENGE
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Korean : Haru Haru - Big Bang Japanese : Mika Nakashima's songs; Yuna Ito's songs Chinese : Lemon Tree - Tarcy, Aiya - Vanness Wu, Scandal - Vanness Wu, Shuo ai jiu ai - Vanness Wu, Jay Chou's rap songs English : Queen's songs, The in crowd - Mitchell Musso, Banquet - Bloc party, Eminem's song, Ain't a thing - Tyler Hilton, Cop Stop - Gavin DeGraw, When you're gone - Avril Lavigne, Pretty fly - The offspring Other Languages : L'hymne à l'amour - Edith Piaf (french), J'envoie valser - Zazie (french), Sambame - Upa Dance (spanish), Quelque Part - Sheryfa Luna (french)
This critic center will be closed and open, closed, open, closed, open... =)
"Customers"
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boadbsklover : Can U Smile - Infinite PiggyMelody : Rainbow Raindrops - Shine Huang jiroSHExfilesTATU : No no no no no - C-Real maknaerin : Can U Smile - Infinite HayHay : The Boys (Eng vers.) - SNSD Mi Young : You And I - Park Bom Rie : Be My Baby - Wonder Girls iammemey : 0330- U KISS Kelly : Me In - Wonder Girls iammemey : Only Learned The Bad Things - B1A4 Kariya : Run Devil Run (Jap vers.) - SNSD PiggyMelody : 五天幾年 - Freya Lin Kariya : Rolling in the deep - Adele Kelly : Bye Bye/The Boys - T-ara/SNSD @Casi : Mistake - SNSD PiggyMelody : 你是我心内的一首歌 - 王力宏&Selina Hyuriko : Silver no udedokei - Morning Musume Hyuriko : Gee (Jazz version) - SNSD @Casi : Possibility - BoA Hyuriko: It hurts - 2NE1 PiggyMelody : 安静了 - SHE PiggyMelody : All Happy - Ah Fu skyangerzx : My My - A Pink Stellaniou : Cover Girl - Infinite Rie: UFO - Stellar Hyuriko: Superstar - Hershe Hyuriko : Yang Wang - Rainie Yang Hara : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo shioЯi : UGLY - 2NE1 Hyuriko: Twinkle - TaeTiSeo shioЯi : Perfect Crime - Vocaloid Hyuriko: Sakura - Ikimono Gakari cafelatte : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo cloudymelody: Nagging - IU ft. Seulong Hyuriko: Flavor of life - Utada hikaru PiggyMelody: 什么样的爱 - Jolin Tsai Hyuriko: Passion - Utada hikaru Hyuriko: Prisoner of love - Utada hikaru cloudymelody: Because I'm a girl - IU Ginger : この胸のときめきを Kono Mune no Tokimeki wo - 真野恵里 Manoeri fujisakura8906 : Tian Mi Mi - Teresa Teng Shiori : Twitter - DevilishP Rie : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo dnxo14 : For Your Love Jang HyeJin Hyuriko: One Two Three - Morning Musume fujisakura8906: Over the Rainbow - Danielle Hope cloudymelody : Heaven - Ailee cloudymelody : The Story Only I Didn't Know - IU Shiori : Because I'm A Woman - IU JasmineMarshiana : Twinkle - TaeTiSeo cloudymelody : I love you - Taeyeon ------------------------------------- cloudymelody: Heaven - Ailee
Update (7 sept 2013) Don't worry, be happy !
PODIUM : 3 favorite covers rated
Casi / memeysuju - B1A4 - Only learned the bad things
JasmineMarshiana - TaeTiSeo - Twinkle
boadbsklover - Infinite - Can you smile
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Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 29th May 2012, 22:01
Song : Passion Artist : Utada Hikaru One shot : No Percent :)
Coucou ma belle c'est encore la republique shrek :3...Pourais tu me donner ton avis sur ce cover la aussi ♥ ? Merci d'avance :p
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 29th May 2012, 23:37
Hyuriko wrote:
Song : Passion Artist : Utada Hikaru One shot : No Percent :)
Coucou ma belle c'est encore la republique shrek :3...Pourais tu me donner ton avis sur ce cover la aussi ♥ ? Merci d'avance :p
Spoiler:
1. Ta voix toujours magnifique. Mais elle a l'air plus fatiguée que d'habitude :D C'est juste une impression. 2. Le début me parait assez bizarre, je ne sais pas si c'est faux parce que d'un côté ça n'a pas l'air d'être faux. C'est peut-être la chanson :D (0:08 a 0`09) 3. Toujours de l'émotion :D 4. Je pense que ton «de» à 0:57, tu l'a attaqué trop bas dans la hauteur de la note et ton «hé hé» de «de», je le trouve pas très beau. Ça manque peut-être de délicatesse. Ton «de» d'après est bon. 5. Ton «a a» de 1:42 est bon, mais pas celui 2:44. 6. Ta note finale est magnifique, mais je trouve qu'on ne l'entend pas assez :D Peut-être que t'as fermé en fondu... Sinon, bah c'est mal coupé à la fin :D On entend le début de la prochaine phrase musicale :D Tu peux toujours le faire avec youtube :D Ta note : 92%. Il y a juste quelques syllabes qui sonnent faux ou bizarre. Le reste est parfait. Mais j'aime toujours pas la chanson :D
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 30th May 2012, 22:34
Song : Prisoner of love Artist : Utada hikaru Percent OS
Coucou Anih c'est encore moi ! Merci pour ta critique d'hier ♥...J'ten donnes du boulot décidément Tu pourais critiqué mon cover ou j'ai été nulle a chier :3 ? S'il te plait poulette ca serais gentil ♥ Je sais que mon rythme est tout bonnement a chier en d'après les seules critiques que j'ai entendu c'est d'un chiant a entendre...La verité est que l'instrumental et 3 fois plus lent que la VO impossible de trouver le bon...Pfah...Bref j'te laisses en juger ^^
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 1st June 2012, 04:44
Hyuriko wrote:
Song : Prisoner of love Artist : Utada hikaru Percent OS
Coucou Anih c'est encore moi ! Merci pour ta critique d'hier ♥...J'ten donnes du boulot décidément Tu pourais critiqué mon cover ou j'ai été nulle a chier :3 ? S'il te plait poulette ca serais gentil ♥ Je sais que mon rythme est tout bonnement a chier en d'après les seules critiques que j'ai entendu c'est d'un chiant a entendre...La verité est que l'instrumental et 3 fois plus lent que la VO impossible de trouver le bon...Pfah...Bref j'te laisses en juger ^^
Spoiler:
1. Je trouve ça bien avec l'instru ! Je comprends pas ce que tu n'aimes pas :D 2. Tu fais tellement court que ça me fait rire :D 3. Ta voix est nickel. On dirait pas que t'es fatiguée. 4. J'aime pas la chanson, ça dit trop «prisoner of love» xD 5. Tes aigus sont AWESOME comme d'habitude. 6. Tu as l'air très à l'aise dans la chanson. Tu as toujours un bon dynamisme, un bon rythme, une bonne articulation, un bon vibrato :D... Mais serais-tu parfaite ? :D 7. Si ton cover est magnifique, ça sert à rien de le mettre dans ce critique office :D Ah si, tu reçois plein de compliments et ça t'encourage :D Mais j'ai vraiment l'impression de me répéter (tous les jours :D ) Ta note : 100%. Nickel. Je devrais t'enlever 20% à chaque fois que tu fais une version courte :D xD
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 1st June 2012, 15:28
AnihJourney wrote:
Hyuriko wrote:
Song : Prisoner of love Artist : Utada hikaru Percent OS
Coucou Anih c'est encore moi ! Merci pour ta critique d'hier ♥...J'ten donnes du boulot décidément Tu pourais critiqué mon cover ou j'ai été nulle a chier :3 ? S'il te plait poulette ca serais gentil ♥ Je sais que mon rythme est tout bonnement a chier en d'après les seules critiques que j'ai entendu c'est d'un chiant a entendre...La verité est que l'instrumental et 3 fois plus lent que la VO impossible de trouver le bon...Pfah...Bref j'te laisses en juger ^^
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1. Je trouve ça bien avec l'instru ! Je comprends pas ce que tu n'aimes pas :D 2. Tu fais tellement court que ça me fait rire :D 3. Ta voix est nickel. On dirait pas que t'es fatiguée. 4. J'aime pas la chanson, ça dit trop «prisoner of love» xD 5. Tes aigus sont AWESOME comme d'habitude. 6. Tu as l'air très à l'aise dans la chanson. Tu as toujours un bon dynamisme, un bon rythme, une bonne articulation, un bon vibrato :D... Mais serais-tu parfaite ? :D 7. Si ton cover est magnifique, ça sert à rien de le mettre dans ce critique office :D Ah si, tu reçois plein de compliments et ça t'encourage :D Mais j'ai vraiment l'impression de me répéter (tous les jours :D ) Ta note : 100%. Nickel. Je devrais t'enlever 20% à chaque fois que tu fais une version courte :D xD
Merci ma puce ♥...J'me suis permises de le poster car lorsque j'ai fais écouter ce cover la a mon cover il m'a dit " Sincèrement quand j'tecoute la j'me fais grave chier ya pas de rythme ya rien j'ai même pas envie de continuer a t'écouter...C'est d'un chiant ma fille..." j'voulais surtout avoir ton avis sur le rythme... En plus j'etais toute fière ! Puis la BAM j'ai même hesité a posté...Puis j'me suis dit " En faite c'est peut etre pas si bien que ca..." Mais bon ca me rassure car je sais que tu a vraiment l'oeil pour faire les critique tu remarque beaucoup de choses ! Donc j'me dit que tu me l'aurais dit s'il y avais eu ce problème...Et puis un cover n'est malheureusement jamais parfait c'est dommage d'ailleurs ^^. En tout cas merci ma puce ♥ en espérant qu'on se reparles sur skype très prochainement ! Je t'aime ma belle ♥
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 6th June 2012, 06:36
Song: Because I'm a Girl Artist: IU Grading system: 5 Video:
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 7th June 2012, 21:46
cloudymelody wrote:
Song: Because I'm a Girl Artist: IU Grading system: 5 Video:
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1. You seem to have a beautiful self-assurance. <3 2. When you sing this song, you put a incredible emotion. 3. Excellent accuracy for the notes. 4. You master your voice but when it's louder, you can do better for some moments :D 5. You can sing low and high notes with the same voice. Lucky you are :D 6. Your voice is very pretty <3 Your rating : 98%. Some moments are not perfect but still good. Emotion is awesome for the entire song.
Ginger Rainbow
Number of posts : 1745 Age : 27 Location : California Registration date : 2011-08-23
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 8th June 2012, 00:16
Song : この胸のときめきを Kono Mune no Tokimeki wo Artist : 真野恵里 Manoeri Video or mp3 : Notation system : 5
fujisakura8906 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 336 Age : 35 Registration date : 2010-07-27
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 8th June 2012, 13:06
Song : Tian Mi Mi Artist : Teresa Teng Video or mp3 :
Notation system : 5 One-shot or no ? : One-shot
Please critic...hehe..i would like to improve myself. Thanks.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 9th June 2012, 12:52
Ginger wrote:
Song : この胸のときめきを Kono Mune no Tokimeki wo Artist : 真野恵里 Manoeri Video or mp3 : Notation system : 5
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1. Your voice is so cute. Like a baby :D 2. You have a great voice but some wrong notes. Your adlibs are not really accurate. The main voice counts about 10 notes. Some are wrong notes when you attack them but you can turn them into the right pitch just after. So you need more practice and sing more, more and more. 3. I feel some emotion but I think you can put more =D 4. The mixing is really good : sync and volumes. 5. You seem self-assured but your voice sometimes isn't mastered. The note can be right, accurate but it's not always beautiful : you can tremble. Example : at 2:02 : your is and . It's accurate but trembling and it's not awesome notes. So you have to work on your "keep notes without trembling". Record you, listen to you and record again... you may improve it. Your rating : 77%. It's a good cover but can be better if you improve your singing and can be awesome if you add more emotion and if you are more accurate.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 9th June 2012, 13:02
fujisakura8906 wrote:
Song : Tian Mi Mi Artist : Teresa Teng Video or mp3 :
Notation system : 5 One-shot or no ? : One-shot
Please critic...hehe..i would like to improve myself. Thanks.
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1. You have a wonderful way to sing !! 2. Your voice is really mastered. I have the impression you can sing everything you want easily. 3. Your voice is so beautiful and powerful. 4. You have a lot of emotion ! I really feel it. 5. All your notes are very accurate 6. I think you have nothing to improve. You are incredible. 7. If you want to improve something, you can work on your breathing, high notes or low notes : everybody can improve it :D But yours are super. Your rating : 100% I'm sorry to not have something to say to you that can help you to improve yourself (omg I don't know if it's in English). It's a perfect cover. Bravo !
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 9th June 2012, 20:47
Song : twitter Artist : DevilishP Video or mp3 : twitter
Notation system : 5 One-shot or no ? : Nope, but I didn't spend as much time/effort on it as I'd have liked...
Rie LTS Snowflake
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 10th June 2012, 05:33
Song: Twinkle Artist : TaeTiSeo video or mp3: notation system: 5 one shot or no: nope :D
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 10th June 2012, 11:15
Shiori wrote:
Song : twitter Artist : DevilishP Video or mp3 : twitter
Notation system : 5 One-shot or no ? : Nope, but I didn't spend as much time/effort on it as I'd have liked...
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1. The beggining is very strange. I don't like it but you have some style. 2. First verse is so professional. 3. Your voice feet with the song. A rock song :D I feel rock in your blood and in your voice :D Your dynamism is perfect. 4. I listened the original and I understand why you sang this way. I think it's better if you don't try to reproduce the voice effects. Your chorus are not pleasant to hear. I think they are still accurate. 5. I love your extra high note :D (3:40) Your rating : 60 % I think if you want to work more on this cover, you have to sing the choruses again with a better voice control.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 10th June 2012, 12:25
Rie wrote:
Song: Twinkle Artist : TaeTiSeo video or mp3: notation system: 5 one shot or no: nope :D
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1. The notes are completely perfect. 2. The dynamism is very very good. 3. The emotion is present. 4. The style is wonderful, you are an SNSD :D 5. The voice is mastered and beautiful. 6. The complicated parts seem to be easy for you. You're a pro ! Your rating : 100%. It's a perfect cover but you can do better :D Something is missing but I don't know what is it : for example, maybe it's the best cover of this ssong but it's not my favorite one. I hope you can find words I can't find :D
dnxo14 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 10th June 2012, 12:56
Number of posts : 352 Age : 28 Location : Indonesia Registration date : 2011-11-11
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 10th June 2012, 14:19
AnihJourney wrote:
Rie wrote:
Song: Twinkle Artist : TaeTiSeo video or mp3: notation system: 5 one shot or no: nope :D
Spoiler:
1. The notes are completely perfect. 2. The dynamism is very very good. 3. The emotion is present. 4. The style is wonderful, you are an SNSD :D 5. The voice is mastered and beautiful. 6. The complicated parts seem to be easy for you. You're a pro ! Your rating : 100%. It's a perfect cover but you can do better :D Something is missing but I don't know what is it : for example, maybe it's the best cover of this ssong but it's not my favorite one. I hope you can find words I can't find :D
Thanks a lot Anih :D I'll work hard to fill in that "something" ><
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 11th June 2012, 21:44
Song : One two three Artist : Morning musume Not a one shot Percent :)
Coucou Anih c'est encore je t'aide dans ta quête de "client" :p ! Donc voila si tu pourrai me donner ton avis sur cela... J'ai eu BEAUCOUP mais alors BEAUCOUP de mal a mixer... Car cette chanson à beaucoup d'effet robotique j'ai essayé de les reproduire du mieux que je peux...Mais j'ai pas reussi pour la hachure du debut que j'ai laissé tel quel... Bref a tout a l'heure ma douce puis merci d'avance ! je t'aime quand même ma banane verte :D ♥
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 11th June 2012, 22:11
1. Your voice is calm and emotionnal. 2. You have one note very loud, I don't really hear it but you reach it I know :D 3. You put lot of emotion. Your «because I love you» is so clear and meaningful =) 4. I hear easily it's not a one shot. It's like 3 persons singing : sometimes too loud, sometimes too dynamic compared to the other part... It can be "ugly" for some people but I think for this cover it's still good. 5. You have a powerful voice and a very good dynamism. I have the impression you feel the song when you sing it and you share it to your auditors. 6. You master entirely your voice <3 You're a great artist ! 7. Some notes are strange but still beautiful at the end of the song :D I don't think it's wrong notes. Your rating : 95%. I think you can easily do one shots because you master your voice and you seem to be able to sing lot of songs even if they are difficult.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 11th June 2012, 22:25
Hyuriko wrote:
Song : One two three Artist : Morning musume Not a one shot Percent :)
Coucou Anih c'est encore je t'aide dans ta quête de "client" :p ! Donc voila si tu pourrai me donner ton avis sur cela... J'ai eu BEAUCOUP mais alors BEAUCOUP de mal a mixer... Car cette chanson à beaucoup d'effet robotique j'ai essayé de les reproduire du mieux que je peux...Mais j'ai pas reussi pour la hachure du debut que j'ai laissé tel quel... Bref a tout a l'heure ma douce puis merci d'avance ! je t'aime quand même ma banane verte :D ♥
Spoiler:
1. Alors -20% parce que c'est un short cover xD 2. J'adore les effets que t'as mis. T'as bien mixé. Moins t'aime mieux c'est ? xD 3. Tes notes c'est parfait. 4. Ton dynamisme aussi mais t'aurais pu mettre plus d'énergie pour celui là :D 5. Ton playback avec le son colle mais ça fait bizarre parce que ton playback est one shot et on voit bien que tu n'as pas chanté en one shot puisque les parts se chevauchent presque. 6. Tu mets toujours autant d'émotion <3 7. C'est mieux coupé que d'habitude mais sérieux fait plus long tes covers xD 8. Je reconnais toujours ta voix... Tu as cette signature vocale que personne dans ma tête n'a et c'est un don précieux pour une chanteuse :D Ta note : 100%. Tu peux faire plus énergique et plus long donc pour les moins vingt pour cent xD ça donne quatre-vingts pour cent :D Crois pas que t'as des bonnes notes parce que je t'aime !! Quand on a du talent... On a la classe ou on l'a pas. Et toi tu l'as :D
dnxo14 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 22 Age : 31 Registration date : 2012-04-28
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 12th June 2012, 03:28
1. Your voice is calm and emotionnal. 2. You have one note very loud, I don't really hear it but you reach it I know :D 3. You put lot of emotion. Your «because I love you» is so clear and meaningful =) 4. I hear easily it's not a one shot. It's like 3 persons singing : sometimes too loud, sometimes too dynamic compared to the other part... It can be "ugly" for some people but I think for this cover it's still good. 5. You have a powerful voice and a very good dynamism. I have the impression you feel the song when you sing it and you share it to your auditors. 6. You master entirely your voice <3 You're a great artist ! 7. Some notes are strange but still beautiful at the end of the song :D I don't think it's wrong notes. Your rating : 95%. I think you can easily do one shots because you master your voice and you seem to be able to sing lot of songs even if they are difficult.
im really glad that you appreciate the emotions i poured on this cover .. thank you :) kekeke .. mixing problems, kekeke .. i mean those parts sounded so different hehehe my bad~ but im happy that you still find it good :)) . .i may not perfectly say it in words but your review really made me so happy today .. (even though i am so hungry while typing this reply kekeke) and tagging me as an "artist" is the greatest compliment i ever had yet :)) thank you very much :)) .. im really happy because of your kind review :)) thank you <3 hehehehe
fujisakura8906 LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 336 Age : 35 Registration date : 2010-07-27
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 16th June 2012, 21:16
Song : The Wizard of Oz Musical- Over the Rainbow (Cover) Artist : Danielle Hope Video or mp3 :
Notation system : Percent One-shot or no ? : One shot
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 17th June 2012, 10:34
fujisakura8906 wrote:
Song : The Wizard of Oz Musical- Over the Rainbow (Cover) Artist : Danielle Hope Video or mp3 :
Notation system : Percent One-shot or no ? : One shot
Spoiler:
1. If you were in my Music Class in High School, you probably have the best mark but if you were in a Singing Contest, I can't decide to produce you. In fact, your cover is really good but I don't find something special, something that hang me. 2. The choruses are really beautiful, the verses seem to have some wrong notes but not really bad. 3. You give some emotion. But you can add more emotion :D 4. You control your voice which is very sweet. 5. You have a very good vibrato. 6. I think you're in the character. So you have a very good dynamism. 7. Your last note is wonderful. Your rating : 92%. Some moments sounding wrong and excellent but not awesome.
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 08:07
Song: Heaven Artist: Ailee Video or mp3:
Notation system: Percent
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 09:53
cloudymelody wrote:
Song: Heaven Artist: Ailee Video or mp3:
Notation system: Percent
Spoiler:
1. Your high notes are amazing ! 2. Your doubles are perfect <3. The last heaven are little bit strange but it's not bad. 3. Some emotion but I think it's not enough. 4. Your voice seems to be mastered in the choruses but less in the verses. 5. I like your adlibs :D 6. The mix is very good. 7. You have a good breathing : the long notes are incredible. 8. I listened 2 times without finding wrong notes. So perfect accuracy =) 9. The dynamism is good in the entire song. Your rating : 98%. Not 100 for the strange heaven I finally like more :D
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 10:00
Song: The Story Only I Didn't Know Artist: IU
Notation system: percent
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 13:57
Song: Because I'm A Woman Artist: IU see siggy~
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 19:51
cloudymelody wrote:
Song: The Story Only I Didn't Know Artist: IU
Notation system: percent
Spoiler:
1. More emotion than the other cover, but you can add more :D It's still a beautiful emotion. 2. Your voice is really mastered. 3. All your notes are accurate and it's really great to listen. 4. Low notes are awesome <3 5. The mix is correct... Some parts are too louder but it adds a style. Your rating : 100%. It's a perfect touching cover.
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 18th June 2012, 20:33
Shiori wrote:
Song: Because I'm A Woman Artist: IU see siggy~
Spoiler:
1. I feel lot of emotion. 2. I hear that it's not a one shot, but it's not bad, don't worry :D We can just notice it easily :D 3. Your high notes are waw <3 4. You did lot of progress !!!! You master more your voice. 5. You sing with your «belly» that is better :D 6. Some notes not entirely controlled but beautiful even if you didn't attack them in the right pitch. 7. It's very short -_- Your rating : 95%. Continue like this <3 It's an amazing cover.
JasmineMarshiana LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 684 Age : 26 Location : Hong Kong Registration date : 2011-11-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 19th June 2012, 15:21
1. YOUR ADLIBS ARE AWESOME <3 Best adlibs on the earth ? lol :D 2. Of course you're wonderful, so I am not just listening to comment but I'm really seaching for defects... SO HARD. You're so perfect that it's very difficult. 3. Your high notes are so beautiful <3 4. You master your voice so easily and perfectly. 5. Emotion is really good. But at 2:15 (your «yeah») it's not enough :D. Tell me if it's normal :D 6. You change your voice perfectly (example 3:19 to 3:20 <3) 7. Maybe your cover have a little bit too much Gverb/Reverb Your rating : 100%. Amazing, wonderful, perfect cover. I'm still jealous :D I want to hear you trying to singing bad to see how your notes will still be beautiful even if they can do wrong :D Your voice is beautiful... you are a complete artist, nothing to improve... :D Lol, we all can improve beathing and languages :D
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 19th June 2012, 23:10
Song: Electric shock Artist: F(x) Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W2zifa1MdY Semi one shot ? On peux dire ca... J'ai fais la première partie en une fois et la deuxième en une fois... Sauf pour les adlibs bien sur :)
Coucou Anih c'est re moi ! Décidement en ce moment je t'harcelles mouhaha... C'est pas bien de faire travailler une mourante ^^ Donc voila si je pourais avoir ta critique la dessus... Ca fais un bail que j'me dis que j'allais faire ce cover puis au final j'ai persisté et voila le resultat... Merci Anih ♥ En espèrant que demain on fasse un ptit karaoké :D
JasmineMarshiana LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 684 Age : 26 Location : Hong Kong Registration date : 2011-11-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th June 2012, 02:14
1. YOUR ADLIBS ARE AWESOME <3 Best adlibs on the earth ? lol :D 2. Of course you're wonderful, so I am not just listening to comment but I'm really seaching for defects... SO HARD. You're so perfect that it's very difficult. 3. Your high notes are so beautiful <3 4. You master your voice so easily and perfectly. 5. Emotion is really good. But at 2:15 (your «yeah») it's not enough :D. Tell me if it's normal :D 6. You change your voice perfectly (example 3:19 to 3:20 <3) 7. Maybe your cover have a little bit too much Gverb/Reverb Your rating : 100%. Amazing, wonderful, perfect cover. I'm still jealous :D I want to hear you trying to singing bad to see how your notes will still be beautiful even if they can do wrong :D Your voice is beautiful... you are a complete artist, nothing to improve... :D Lol, we all can improve beathing and languages :D
Thank you :)))) just. trying to be.. sexy at the YEAh xdddd
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th June 2012, 08:52
Hyuriko wrote:
Song: Electric shock Artist: F(x) Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W2zifa1MdY Semi one shot ? On peux dire ca... J'ai fais la première partie en une fois et la deuxième en une fois... Sauf pour les adlibs bien sur :) Coucou Anih c'est re moi ! Décidement en ce moment je t'harcelles mouhaha... C'est pas bien de faire travailler une mourante ^^ Donc voila si je pourais avoir ta critique la dessus... Ca fais un bail que j'me dis que j'allais faire ce cover puis au final j'ai persisté et voila le resultat... Merci Anih ♥ En espèrant que demain on fasse un ptit karaoké :D
Spoiler:
1. Ça manque un tout petit peu d'électricité :D 2. Ta voix et tes notes sont parfaites 3. Le mix est super, à des moments ça semble tout de même un peu en -. Les volumes sont très bons. 4. Ton émotion est bonne, comme d'habitude. 5. Tes fins de «phrases» sont INCROYABLES <3 6. Quand y'a des parties parlées, t'es WAW. C'est méga réussi. 7. J'aime trop les effets. 8. Le fait que ça soit en entier me donne envie de te mettre 300% de plus :D Je suis si pas habituée :) Ta note : 98%. C'est un AMAZING cover qui aurait pu être encore plus amazing avec quelques parties pas assez bien calées pour moi :D Je te tiens au courant, l'électricité ne te fait pas perdre de point :D T'As vu mon jeu de mots ? lol
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 20th June 2012, 14:16
Song: Missing You Like Crazy Artist: Taeyeon Song:
Notation system: Percent
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 21st June 2012, 09:16
cloudymelody wrote:
Song: Missing You Like Crazy Artist: Taeyeon Song:
Notation system: Percent
Spoiler:
1. I think your first high and long «yo» is a little bit too flat. The last one is better but I am wondering if it's not a little bit flat too. 2. I think you should have "decrease" the volume of the instrumental before «ireokke» or volume up your part. Because I don't hear clearly compared to the rest of the song. Too much volume differencies when you sing really loud or really soft. 3. You put a lot of emotion.. I listened the original and I'm wondering if you put more emotion than Taeyeon :D 4. You have some other notes not accurate. I suppose for one, it's too low for you. So you can work to sing low notes. 5. You're voice fits with the song and it's really mastered. 6. When you reach high notes, it's very beautiful. Your rating : 96%. Some notes don't sound perfectly accurate. It's still a perfect cover with lot of emotion.
Shiori Rainbow
Number of posts : 896 Age : 29 Location : Where the polar bears roam and beavers chomp and igloos reside~! Come ski with me in July ;D Registration date : 2012-03-02
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 21st June 2012, 14:51
1. You control more your voice ! 2. Your high harmonies are awesome !! 3. The instru seems too loud for some parts and loud mainly. 4. Some notes are fragile but accurate. 5. You put lot emotion !! But more is possible :D 6. Your voice is clear and you don't sing with the throat so it's really nice to listen. Your score : 97%. Instrumental is too loud. Some notes still fragile, so sing more and it will be more than wonderful-awesome-amazing :D
Hyuriko LTS Raindrop
Number of posts : 419 Age : 31 Location : France , Montbéliard Registration date : 2011-04-17
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 21st June 2012, 15:55
Coucou ma puce c'est re moi en direct de chez ma mère... Ou internet beug un peu ^__^ Ma puce tu pourrais critiquer nos voix sur cette collab ? J'espère que le timing de l'instru est mieux...Voila voila bisous ma puce ♥
Song : Twinkle Artist : TTS
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 22nd June 2012, 11:22
Hyuriko wrote:
Coucou ma puce c'est re moi en direct de chez ma mère... Ou internet beug un peu ^__^ Ma puce tu pourrais critiquer nos voix sur cette collab ? J'espère que le timing de l'instru est mieux...Voila voila bisous ma puce ♥
Song : Twinkle Artist : TTS
Spoiler:
1. Vos voix vont super bien ensemble que parfois, je ne sais pas les différencier. (pour les adlibs) 2. Enjinks est moins dynamique que toi. 3. Vous avez toutes les deux assez d'émotion. 4. Les voix sont bien synchronisées en général. J'aime particulièrement le premier refrain. Parfois, ça colle pas super. 5. Eva : 4 (0:35 «na»), 0:43, 0:59 la fin du «jeo», 1:04-05 pour la longue note, c'est pas juste mais ça passe. Enjinks : 1 (1:55, l'attaque de la note «lu») =» les notes pas super justes. 6. Un adlib (owoh owoh) n'est pas tip top :D 7. Enjinks fait un effet de style (2:27) à un moment, mais ça ne colle pas avec le reste de la chanson puisque sa voix est plutôt légère et pop pendant toute la chanson. Celui du début était très bien. 8. C'est fait exprès les clics à la fin ? :D 9. Les aigus de la fin sont bien chantés, mais ne vont pas super avec le reste, peut-être à cause du mix, ou bien de la voix qui est différente et qui ne se marie pas forcément bien avec les autres voix. 10. Vos voix se complètent bien parce que je trouve que Enjinks à une voix douce, tu as une voix dans les couplets qui est très forte. Peut-être trop la même puissance tout le temps. Je pense qu'il aurait été mieux que tu varies les puissances. Tu l'as variée dans couplets/refrains, mais tu aurais pu varier la puissance dans les couplets eux-mêmes et dans les refrains eux-mêmes. Le premier couplet, t'as bien varié la puissance. Votre note : 92%. Il y a plusieurs petits défauts, mais je trouve que c'est quand même un AWESOME cover.
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 26th June 2012, 14:32
All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.
Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 12th October 2012, 14:38
All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.
Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D
Oh it's okay. You're not accepting requests at the moment, are you?
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 12th October 2012, 17:18
All are solo, except for the song 'Nagging'. That one used Seulong's voice in the instrumental.
Sorry, I gave up my big project, you can post all the videos I haven't critiqued yet here but maybe if you put the oldest videos, I can give a different mark because I changed :D
Oh it's okay. You're not accepting requests at the moment, are you?
Yes yes you can post :D I will change the status... I just wanted you to be the first to know :D
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 13th October 2012, 01:46
Ohhh okay thanks very much! In that case, can you review this?
Pitch 192/200 : (0:58) (1:25) (1:34)note too low for you I think (1:40)difficulty to reach the note Emotion 200/200 : I hear emotion everywhere, everywhere, everytime :D Quality 150/150 : Easy to listen million times because nothing really wrong. Hearing 130/150 : Some passages are not enough louder, some are too loud : I mean too much differences. I think it's because it's not your key... 1 tone higher, maybe it would be good but I know we can't always choose :D Awesomeness 100/100 : You're totally Awesome !! I really like your cover ;D The final word is awesome <3 Fidelity 100/100 : Easily to recognize the song :D Originality 0/30 : Doesn't mean you haven't got originality ;D I just like special covers with something more to bring... Like harmonies, adlibs or another melody for one or more parts of the song. Personnal cover 150/150 : We hear it's you singing and we recognize you. You seem to have not copied the original song. You took the song for you :D You sang for you :D Language 146/150 : Some "letters" are not totally distincts. Omg 2/10 : I can't tell "OMG" so you can do better than this ;D Captivating 80/100 : You didn't catch me entirely ;D Technique 180/200 : Low notes are "trembling". (1:53)seems to be little bit flat. (2:02)you can attack the note better ;D (2:28 to 2:29)not perfectly reach compared to 2:29 to 2:30 where it's perfect and 2:27 to 2:28. Transitions 90/100 : Transitions are well done (2:39 to 2:42) we hear like it's not sang one shot here. Microphone (I called it Microphone but it's not your microphone I'm rating :D) 9/10 : I hear you clearly, 1 saturation (2:50) Rhythm 90/90 : All is timed with the instrumental Breathing 60/60 : We hear your breathing and I love how we hear it ;D You can sing long notes until the end Bonus (long cover, fitting song, ...) 2/4
Total : 1681/1800 93% It's an awesome cover :D
NB : This is the "harsh" critique :O :D If I take my old critique, you have 99% ;D
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 14th October 2012, 11:21
AnihJourney wrote:
Pitch 192/200 : (0:58) (1:25) (1:34)note too low for you I think (1:40)difficulty to reach the note Emotion 200/200 : I hear emotion everywhere, everywhere, everytime :D Quality 150/150 : Easy to listen million times because nothing really wrong. Hearing 130/150 : Some passages are not enough louder, some are too loud : I mean too much differences. I think it's because it's not your key... 1 tone higher, maybe it would be good but I know we can't always choose :D Awesomeness 100/100 : You're totally Awesome !! I really like your cover ;D The final word is awesome <3 Fidelity 100/100 : Easily to recognize the song :D Originality 0/30 : Doesn't mean you haven't got originality ;D I just like special covers with something more to bring... Like harmonies, adlibs or another melody for one or more parts of the song. Personnal cover 150/150 : We hear it's you singing and we recognize you. You seem to have not copied the original song. You took the song for you :D You sang for you :D Language 146/150 : Some "letters" are not totally distincts. Omg 2/10 : I can't tell "OMG" so you can do better than this ;D Captivating 80/100 : You didn't catch me entirely ;D Technique 180/200 : Low notes are "trembling". (1:53)seems to be little bit flat. (2:02)you can attack the note better ;D (2:28 to 2:29)not perfectly reach compared to 2:29 to 2:30 where it's perfect and 2:27 to 2:28. Transitions 90/100 : Transitions are well done (2:39 to 2:42) we hear like it's not sang one shot here. Microphone (I called it Microphone but it's not your microphone I'm rating :D) 9/10 : I hear you clearly, 1 saturation (2:50) Rhythm 90/90 : All is timed with the instrumental Breathing 60/60 : We hear your breathing and I love how we hear it ;D You can sing long notes until the end Bonus (long cover, fitting song, ...) 2/4
Total : 1681/1800 93% It's an awesome cover :D
NB : This is the "harsh" critique :O :D If I take my old critique, you have 99% ;D
Wow thanks so much for the details! Will work harder next time:) Maybe I'd get a 95% on a harsh critique next time? Ahahah wishful thinking sorry sorry. :P Thanks again! ^^
cloudymelody LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 911 Age : 27 Location : Singapore Registration date : 2012-05-01
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 14th October 2012, 12:12
Sorry for disturbing! But can you critique this song?
Since it's a duet, can you just critique my parts alone? I sang under my yt account name of Melodic Skies, and the person who's currently singing appears at the bottom right corner of the screen. Thanks much! (If it helps, I sang Haeri's part)
Alicia LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 1054 Age : 24 Location : Singapore ! Registration date : 2011-10-29
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 14th October 2012, 14:23
Song : INFINITIZE + The Chaser Artist : Infinite Link : VVPC* or NC* : VVPC . :)
I sing as Sunggyu . :P .
AnihJourney LTS Firefly
Number of posts : 518 Age : 32 Location : France Registration date : 2011-10-10
Subject: Re: [OPEN] Anih's office 16th October 2012, 10:21
cloudymelody wrote:
Sorry for disturbing! But can you critique this song?
Since it's a duet, can you just critique my parts alone? I sang under my yt account name of Melodic Skies, and the person who's currently singing appears at the bottom right corner of the screen. Thanks much! (If it helps, I sang Haeri's part)
Pitch 77/100 : (2:23) sounds false, (0:54), (2:28 to 2:32) sounds not perfect but not completely false. The adlibs x2 are good for breathing and technique but "finish" sounding false. (3:20) little false. Less than + or - 1/2 tone ;D Emotion 100/100 : Completely amazing <3 Hearing 60/75 : We don't really hear you for low notes at the beggining + (0:45). (0:49) : losing too muchpowerful. (1:51) (1:55) Awesomeness 50/50 : I am jealous of your talent ;D Fidelity 50/50 : We recognize easily the song Language 73/75 : not the same than the lyrics you put on the descrption box. I didn't count it because I don't know if it's «deliberated». So i found some passages in your last solo. Omg 2/5 : It's impressive. Captivating 50/50 : completely IN :D Technique 98/100 : good vibrato, long notes(1:02, 1:07, 1:15) are very good !!!, (1:14) little problem ;D (2:17) «glide» not perfect (3:09) seems you have difficulties to reach the note, Rhythm 45/45 Breathing 28/30 : (2:27) seems you are lacking of breath Bonus 1/2 : this song suits you very well.
Total : 634/680 93% First listening I thought you will have a better mark. After criticizing I thought you will have a worse mark. Finaly it's the same mark than your other cover ;D It's a really beautiful duet !!